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I feel like feeling awful.
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Here is one that makes me especially sad when I hear it. Great lyrics.
Losing It - Rush http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KEAtw48LDv8 |
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They Like It When I Bleed
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thank you for your insights
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I'm Lost in the Dark
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Something about this line gets to me especially:
do my tears stain your face
I like this rhyme at the end at the start… strengthen all my weakness else I’m lost in the dark feeling anxious feelings reading it. 
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"I Cry Out"...
Edited by
DaySinner
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exceptional work, Leigh
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Blow Me a Kiss
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ingenious
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Is It Really Love?
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sounds to me like you are writing about the falseness of short lived relationships.
hearts without flames
don’t burn like the rest nice line
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The Demon in Her Throat!
Edited by
DaySinner
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Sat 12/15/12 10:46 PM
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Making love in the woods where there is danger! Animal passion and desire overrides fear. But there is also a love bond. Exciting write!
>>> passion smile goes here <<< |
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DaySinner
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Thank you for your post FearandLoathing. I identify with what you write.
In my line of work i often wonder what price is paid when trading the English language for a programming language, Writing line upon line of code for MacHine to read. The effort is never toward conveying ideas and feelings but, instead, to follow rules and fulfill expectations, to make the job easier for the next programmer. Am i disconnecting from humanity? Is their a trend toward losing the ability to express? a beautiful language cut to pieces by texting and short commands. "welcome my son, welcome to the machine" - pink floyd |
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every word that we do send
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great work
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I enjoyed your post. Thank you.
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When God will bless those who heard His voice and obeyed
Sometimes it goes beyond choice.
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DaySinner
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Incomprehensible our minds just blur
yup |
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“No Words Can Be Said”
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a beautiful poem.
I'm in a state of silent shock is over what happened today. 
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True Lovers Dance...
Edited by
DaySinner
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Fri 12/14/12 12:19 PM
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you've conveyed your struggle for freedom very well
I like this part especially 
as true lovers take a chance reveling in romances dance... i really like this write. it paints your story with pigments of emotion. |
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" i am it, it is me "
profound thinking here. |
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Letter of Intent
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this is so beautiful and overwhelming
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Letter of Intent
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this is so beautiful and overwhelming
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Shot of Chest Burn
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entertaining and creative. Maybe another drink to help recover what was forgotten that night? Cheers
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I feel like feeling awful.
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Poignant. That "can't live without you" feeling is often damaging. And in the aftermath...
Simon and Garfunkel - Bookends http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5S5V-Y53ad4 |
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An Emotional Bong
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