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Topic: ~ this is going to hurt,im sorry
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 12/13/12 08:12 PM
time you freaky offspring makes no sense makes nonsense we spend it fill it regret it kill it play it you love to need it to unlove you need it its never satisfied it leaves it never waits it never cries it never loves ive met it i am it it is me this is going to hurt,im sorry

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Thu 12/13/12 08:15 PM
I love it when your poems go to darker, more assertive tones. This is great!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 12/13/12 08:17 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 12/13/12 08:28 PM
A timely write..Makes mucho senso to me..

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Thu 12/13/12 10:40 PM


AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 12/14/12 02:51 AM
Teasing, I love your clever use of time..

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 12/14/12 05:41 AM
Wait up, I'll go with you....

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Fri 12/14/12 11:42 AM
" i am it, it is me " profound thinking here.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 12/15/12 05:37 AM
plastic_pancakes....you,made me smile. tazzops... Ainjel... penny.... AthenaRose2...thankyou,kindly. Leigh2154......smile DaySinner...i appreciate your comments.

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