Topic: "I Cry Out"... | |
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Edited by
Leigh2154
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Sun 12/16/12 10:15 AM
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I Cry Out…..
I cry out as darkness fills the land though sun does rise to glorify this morn, set calmly in the grace of eve while snow falls white on barren fields of corn… I cry out, for every tiny heart bemoan yet my own heart swells in pride for the bravest souls who shielded them from price of death then died… I cry out as the march proceeds and gallant steeds carry home each precious gift swept off too soon in tides of red unknown… I cry out, but will not question why nor doubt the painful truth of life Only can I bow my head in sad repose cloaked in bent and broken strife... © |
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a really really wonderful poem
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i cant put words to this even, at least not yet.
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Leigh this was touchingly beautiful...
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This is absolutely awesome, Leigh.
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Sun 12/16/12 11:15 AM
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exceptional work, Leigh
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a really really wonderful poem Thank you Harsh, though all mass shootings leave us reeling, this one simply dropped me to my knees... |
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i cant put words to this even, at least not yet. Dear Kevin, How much I appreciate your comment! You will put it to words because it's what you do, what we all do! I love your work! Sincerely, Anticipation |
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Leigh this was touchingly beautiful... Ainjel, you make me feel appreciated and that is such a greatl feeling...Luv ya! |
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This is absolutely awesome, Leigh. Now for you ...I should probably take this to email, but what the hell!...This from you to me is beyond words because I so respect your talent...Just let me say this...If I could take back one day, do it over again, I would.. |
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exceptional work, Leigh Hello Day Tripper! Thank you for reading and commenting! |
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I Cry Out….. I cry out… I cry out… I cry out… I cry out... © As do I, Leigh.. your work is beautiful and rending.. |
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beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul
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As do I, Leigh.. your work is beautiful and rending.. Thank you Athena, emotions push my pen.... |
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beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul Hey Tex, you're home early! Miss and love you! |
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beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul Hey Tex, you're home early! Miss and love you! |
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This lovely poem is really beautiful: it is both poignant and emotive and teems with sentiment. It has truly touched my heart today.
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(((D)))...Thank you for you generous reply
Slow, you rock!! ManO, stop blushing, pink is for girls! |
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Thank you for Stating my emotions in such grace.
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