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Topic: "I Cry Out"...
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Sun 12/16/12 10:15 AM
Edited by Leigh2154 on Sun 12/16/12 10:15 AM
I Cry Out…..

I cry out as darkness fills the land
though sun does rise to glorify this morn,
set calmly in the grace of eve
while snow falls white on barren fields of corn…

I cry out, for every tiny heart bemoan
yet my own heart swells in pride
for the bravest souls who shielded them
from price of death then died…

I cry out as the march proceeds
and gallant steeds carry home
each precious gift swept off too soon
in tides of red unknown…

I cry out, but will not question why
nor doubt the painful truth of life
Only can I bow my head in sad repose
cloaked in bent and broken strife...

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Sun 12/16/12 10:28 AM
a really really wonderful poem

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Sun 12/16/12 10:40 AM
i cant put words to this even, at least not yet.

brokenheart brokenheart brokenheart

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Sun 12/16/12 10:44 AM
Leigh this was touchingly beautiful...:heart:

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Sun 12/16/12 10:51 AM
This is absolutely awesome, Leigh.

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Sun 12/16/12 11:14 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Sun 12/16/12 11:15 AM
exceptional work, Leigh

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Sun 12/16/12 11:35 AM

a really really wonderful poem


Thank you Harsh, though all mass shootings leave us reeling, this one simply dropped me to my knees...flowerforyou

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Sun 12/16/12 11:43 AM

i cant put words to this even, at least not yet.

brokenheart brokenheart brokenheart


Dear Kevin,

How much I appreciate your comment!flowers You will put it to words because it's what you do, what we all do!:heart:

I love your work!

Sincerely,

Anticipation :wink:

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Sun 12/16/12 11:46 AM

Leigh this was touchingly beautiful...:heart:


Ainjel, you make me feel appreciated and that is such a greatl feeling...Luv ya!:heart:

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Sun 12/16/12 11:52 AM

This is absolutely awesome, Leigh.


Now for you:heart: ...I should probably take this to email, but what the hell!...This from you to me is beyond words because I so respect your talent...Just let me say this...If I could take back one day, do it over again, I would..:smile:

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Sun 12/16/12 11:53 AM

exceptional work, Leigh


Hello Day Tripper!:tongue: Thank you for reading and commenting!flowerforyou

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Sun 12/16/12 01:19 PM

I Cry Out…..

I cry out…

I cry out…

I cry out…

I cry out...

©


As do I, Leigh.. your work is beautiful and rending.. flowerforyou

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Sun 12/16/12 01:41 PM
beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul :heart:

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Sun 12/16/12 02:14 PM


As do I, Leigh.. your work is beautiful and rending.. flowerforyou


Thank you Athena, emotions push my pen....flowerforyou

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Sun 12/16/12 02:16 PM

beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul :heart:


Hey Tex, you're home early!:banana: Miss and love you!:heart: smooched :heart:

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Sun 12/16/12 02:41 PM


beautiful, sweetheart. you are such a loving soul :heart:


Hey Tex, you're home early!:banana: Miss and love you!:heart: smooched :heart:
blushing

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Mon 12/17/12 10:15 AM
This lovely poem is really beautiful: it is both poignant and emotive and teems with sentiment. It has truly touched my heart today.

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Mon 12/17/12 10:41 AM
flowerforyou

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Tue 12/18/12 05:37 AM
(((D)))...Thank you for you generous replyflowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Slow, you rock!!flowerforyou


ManO, stop blushing, pink is for girls!laugh :heart:

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Tue 12/18/12 05:45 AM
Thank you for Stating my emotions in such grace. brokenheart

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