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Topic: An Emotional Bong
AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/12/12 10:33 AM
You have made a silly mistake if you think I get off on hate… I don’t hoard negative energy inside where it can fester eat away at my pride… NO! I boldly let what I feel loose especially when my aim is true… BUT… who really cares IF… or WHEN I’m wrong? has anyone ever toked from an emotional bong? inhaling thoughts and feelings like smoke… exhaling them quickly so we don’t CHOKE… strangling alive is no way to die I prefer instead to get high on life… sharing my stories false starts and glories… this is what I call ART… enjoying every word with all my friends cause we never know if our togetherness will end nothing is certain on this writers road of ours so we put our faith in our higher powers… and as we focus on positive attention it’s easier to make that emotional connection Copyright© Athena Rose 12/12/12

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Wed 12/12/12 10:50 AM
So how do you light it?

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/12/12 12:16 PM
Andy.. I thought you are supposed to be good..

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Wed 12/12/12 04:10 PM
Andy, PLEASE BE GOOD! Get it?

Muaness Joined Mon 11/05/12 Posts: 2993	Wed 12/12/12 05:32 PM Edited by Muaness on Wed 12/12/12 05:33 PM
I don’t hoard negative energy inside Yes, I don't not for my sake but for your sake if I did its venom must be unleashed its purpose must be achieved I feel its power trying to shadow me but I overcame it for my soul seek not vengeance but peace and comfort. I know I loved foolishly I know gave more than I have but don't tell it to a stranger and don't tell it to me So that you don't create what you would ever live to tell.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 12/12/12 08:15 PM
I really liked this Athena..

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 12/12/12 10:40 PM
Ok.. you win.. Andy.. will... you... PLEASE.. be ... good... today.. ur just too funny.. WOW! Muaness... I like yours more than mine.. you gripped me in the gut with this reply.. I'm at a loss for words.. I can only sense a fear.. thank you for posting it.. it is quite awesome.. Yes, I don't not for my sake but for your sake if I did its venom must be unleashed its purpose must be achieved I feel its power trying to shadow me but I overcame it for my soul seek not vengeance but peace and comfort. I know I loved foolishly I know gave more than I have but don't tell it to a stranger and don't tell it to me So that you don't create what you would ever live to tell. As always.. Ainjel.. I'm happy you like..

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1542	Thu 12/13/12 01:40 AM
Puff Puff and pass it around life to be enjoyed

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 12/13/12 04:02 AM
funny, mig, but you are right.. life is to be enjoyed.. even savored..

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Thu 12/13/12 01:57 PM


AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 12/14/12 02:33 PM
Thank you for your sweet gesture, Sinner..

MisLopez Joined Tue 11/16/10 Posts: 85	Mon 12/17/12 07:37 AM
Cool write!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/17/12 09:39 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Mon 12/17/12 09:42 AM
Sorry about this post.. Mingle isn't working quickly today..

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/17/12 09:41 AM
As always.. MisLopez.. your sweet comments are welcome..