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Edited by
AthenaRose2
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Thu 12/13/12 01:00 AM
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 I have to break away
Do you not hear what I say… Whether knowingly or by mistake I must follow another sway… When I’m alone I cry… I wonder WHY? This steep price I pay for FREEDOM’S FLIGHT… Is it worth the cost to know I’m right? YES! When the four winds slowly beckon me I know it is my destiny… CALLING CALLING out for me… to flee.. to be free… It is the wisdom of the ages not born of fools but only sages searching through life’s turning pages there we’ll find our sinful wages… Never to hide from our wanton pride… for it is written across the sky bearing witness to what’s inside and the truth she does not lie.. if we owe a precious debt been denied some happiness opening hearts their opening doors entering where we may explore… pray this night with silent eyes to interpret love’s disguise bringing peace across the land with virtuous karma in our hand… and with our ears may we hear every heartbeat loud and clear… as true lovers take a chance reveling in romances dance...
Copyright© Athena Rose 12/13/12 
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You go girl . . . love this poetic art. Athena you are truly a gifted writer!!
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oh mig.. you honor me.. as I respect your voice above my own.. thank you for your heartfelt response..
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I do love to watch clogging.
Very nice Karen.   
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Clogging, huh?
 Veryyyyy interesting.. lol.. thank you for all the flowers Jeff.. very kind of you..
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Every Heart beat loud.
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Breaking up is so very hard to do....
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Yes it is, Leigh,
 but sometimes it's for the best... or else how will we ever dance again... with romance...
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Aaahh, Jeff.. you are a puzzle to me today, my dear friend... but I do get the correlation now...
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Yes it is, Leigh, but sometimes it's for the best... or else how will we ever dance again... with romance...
Even more to the point, "sometimes" self preservation deems it unavoidable...For me, writing is like therapy or journaling...The process has walked me through a few very difficult situations.......To coping!  Cheers!
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Yes it is, Leigh, but sometimes it's for the best... or else how will we ever dance again... with romance...
Even more to the point, "sometimes" self preservation deems it unavoidable...For me, writing is like therapy or journaling...The process has walked me through a few very difficult situations.......To coping! Cheers!
I've never used this quote thingy before, so I'm trying it right now.. if I get it wrong.. apologies.. Yes, exactly, Leigh.. self preservation.. and cathartic expressions in writing to release the painful energy.. to heal easier and quicker.. I'm so pleased we can relate.. thank you for your kind understanding..
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Another great poem
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MisLopez, it's always a pleasure to see you.. and I thank you for commenting on my work..
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Fri 12/14/12 12:19 PM
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you've conveyed your struggle for freedom very well
I like this part especially
as true lovers take a chance reveling in romances dance... i really like this write. it paints your story with pigments of emotion. |
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Thank you for your insightful opinion of my work.. Sinner... Yes, now that I've been spirited to post the Letter of Intent today, i see the secret lovers dance of romance just beginning...
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