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Rambles...
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i love this structure. I'm hearing music. A woman with deadpan eyes is singing it with special emphasis on each ending.
I especially like this last part Blind faith rose and carried back home the one who mattered most in this catacomb of life ME... There is only one person you can truly count on. It's the dirty truth. |
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The Lady in 4 inch heels
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This line made me smile...
Every time someone plays, "Queen of the Silver Dollar" he can't help but to smile and envision Ruth doing what she did best
. . making everyone feel loved. thank you penny |
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frozen sunflowers
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Really loved this one PP. A snapshot of the world today. You make me feel the deterioration.
I especially appreciate these paradoxical lines of truth: you are beauty and horror hell's reluctant kiss the lisp of an infinite wisdom |
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capsize
Edited by
DaySinner
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Thu 12/20/12 06:34 PM
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I think this part is especially good ( i mean well conveyed )
it’s a playground that’s been drowned in blood
love notes and shoelaces caked with mud it's an owl that doesnt trust the tree an empty chair on Christmas Eve And the last two lines ring so true. Powerful write. |
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Cycle
Edited by
DaySinner
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Thu 12/20/12 06:26 PM
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Cool. I like the way this poem unfolds. Starts out in dread but ends on a spiritual message.
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Have We All Forgotten?
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A lovely Christmas poem.
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Thoughts..
Edited by
DaySinner
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Thu 12/20/12 06:12 PM
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I love the way this one took some attention.
Is it that even with strong emotions, life forces us to make rough-cut decisions, which can be messy, often causing unpredictable debris. But the debris may have a beauty of it's own, as it is also part of life. Maybe a little guilt about that Christmas tree? Jeez, i hope i'm not completely off after writing all that! lol I enjoyed. |
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group hug
Edited by
DaySinner
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Thu 12/20/12 05:36 PM
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you are too kind. thank you all :)
It was meant to be tongue-in-cheek, and I love this addiction to emotion that poetry brings out. But the main thing i want to express is that i'm grateful to have you all as friends. I think every one of you is really cool. |
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Athena, i imagine this one reveals a lot about who you are. good thoughts, spiritual.
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The Dream
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this poem shows great spirit essence. i liked it
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Arsenic and Old Lace...
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I liked this one too. Well written, very expressive. The dark side of is a bit disturbing.
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--- The Living Dead ---
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wow, good one. powerfully depressing.
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group hug
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you are
reckless derelicts misguided socialists depressed anarchists incurable empathics mildly sexist hard-core philosophists wannabe philanthropists emotional addicts all! love you |
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One Lover too Many
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nicely written. I think this one would do well as lyrics in music. Sort of a "torn between two lovers" type theme.
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Red on White
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wow i really like this one.
I like every line. |
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JADED
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nice. I like your passion in this one.
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Love! Who Needs It?
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so much love in your heart.
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Topic:
Inside of Me
Edited by
DaySinner
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Mon 12/17/12 10:15 AM
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Her touch was like a butterfly’s kiss soft subtle and everlasting it was more than something for me to hold onto it was my reason for holding on This is really good. a butterfly's kiss - how did you ever come up with that? perfect description, conveys so much. everlasting because you dare not try to capture for fear of harming. |
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Happy Holidays
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mig25 i like the way you write. This one is as smooth and pleasing as the hot chocolate.
fell like silent angels love the way you capture that quiet feeling of winter white.
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Somewhere Deep Within
Edited by
DaySinner
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Mon 12/17/12 09:50 AM
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we go about our busy little lives oblivious to the greater part of reality which is the universe. We are so tiny and fragile. I like this line:
The beauty is just as breathtaking as the terror
There is a connection between the inner and outer universe that we are only beginning to discover. |
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