I feel/relate to this poem. Thank you much for it teasingbrunette

I liked "Eyes" the most. It made me feel part of your family. Really good writing!

Very nice, reminds me of a protective incantation.

A beautiful, wistful write. I like this. I love questions.

Very cute!
Let us give in to appetites and grow fat together!

shouts of joy, excited thrills
curiosity peeks
tantalizing games in play
my heart grows with interest%

anxiously, fervently,
I try to finish work
excited that I can finish
but it doesn't let me go

it digs at me relentlessly
like a demon from unknown depths
tearing ever deeply my skin
the closer I'm toward the end

children outside laugh and run
and wait for me to to join
but as the day sets the sun
they wonder if I care

i want so much to be with you
where they are and where they go
i want so much to see that special girl
the one that forgives me most

but I'll stay inside to do my chores
and by the day's end I'm spent
with no reward but television
to help me forget
how much I have cheated myself

I bask in its bluish light
softly, quietly it infiltrates
i forget, i don't even know
as it slowly harvests my soul
as it takes away
whatever that is left

i am done
now i am become
radio-active death
i must never, ever,
let
you
see
me
like
this

"Goodnight, you princes of Maine. You kings of New England."
- The Cider House Rules

I like the words you choose.
Really good!

thank you ladies!

Clever. Perhaps dangerous!!

But sweet.

pleasant. nice. a good reminder.

Beautiful in its simplicity, imagery, and meaning. It communicates so much!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VvpmxY4dc4c

"My mother? Let me tell you about my mother..."

Blade Runner


"Gentlemen, you can't fight in here! This is the War Room!"

Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb

I'm happly I can make you happy
but please don't need or expect
to rule the way I feel

I HAVE no control
I don't even know
what will make me happy?

hate me for this
foget that I exsit
and you can MAKE me sad

this is your control
this is my punishment.
this is isolation

of course I can't relax
i must always remember
to thine own self be true
but to others, NEVER be yourself!

and surely it must follow
that what I write isn't me
and it isn't not me

I was editing my comment and it didn't take. Anyway, what I was saying...

had to read it more than a couple of times to really appreciate it. I'ts so loud and in your face almost like an affront. But then there is something else going on underneath. Loved it!

aah... innocence, so mellow and breezy. Very good!

wicked, entertaining, good stuff!!

Thank you penny

I feel a connection with this one. Flows very smoothly too. Meaningful.

good stuff! I like!!