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Topic: Is It Really Love?
AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 12/15/12 01:46 PM
Unreal love is a liar’s shame it gets what it wants by playing head games through exploiting its source misleading emotions it grows from the outside in nobody knows… while gossips reveal what’s not theirs to give but betrayal that’s felt is only short lived… for when put to the truth test they aptly confess hearts without flames don’t burn like the rest… Copyright©AthenaRose 12/15/12

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sat 12/15/12 11:00 PM
sounds to me like you are writing about the falseness of short lived relationships. hearts without flames don’t burn like the rest nice line

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sun 12/16/12 12:10 AM
Hi Sinner... it's so exciting to see you are analyzing my work, and coming to a pretty accurate conclusion... I don't know if a relationship without true love is short lived... cuz real feelings can always grow as time goes on, but for us old-timers that have been around the block already, it's not hard to spot if something is genuine or not... Once again, I truly appreciate your comments, as you know your opinion is special to me...

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