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Topic: Is It Really Love?
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Sat 12/15/12 01:46 PM
Unreal love
is a liar’s shame
it gets what it wants
by playing head games
through exploiting its source
misleading emotions it grows
from the outside in
nobody knows…
while gossips reveal
what’s not theirs to give
but betrayal that’s felt
is only short lived…
for when put to the truth test
they aptly confess
hearts without flames
don’t burn like the rest…

:heart:Copyright©AthenaRose 12/15/12:heart:
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Sat 12/15/12 11:00 PM
sounds to me like you are writing about the falseness of short lived relationships.

hearts without flames
don’t burn like the rest


nice line flowerforyou
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Sun 12/16/12 12:10 AM
Hi Sinner... it's so exciting to see you are analyzing my work, and coming to a pretty accurate conclusion...flowerforyou I don't know if a relationship without true love is short lived... cuz real feelings can always grow as time goes on, but for us old-timers that have been around the block already, it's not hard to spot if something is genuine or not...

Once again, I truly appreciate your comments, as you know your opinion is special to me... flowerforyou

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