Somewhere deep within the universal galaxies of consiousnes

Lies sight, clearer than reality

The beauty is just as breathtaking as the terror


~mislopez~

And when the third eye opens all shall be revealed leaving us to finally understand we all know nothing at all.

Wow! Love the visual intensity...

Athena Rose, thank you.. that is much appreciated coming from you.. I have been wanting to write also, especially after being inspired by your talents as well as some others here on the sight. This one I did not plan to write... my mind manifestes at times, so I wrote it down. Lol. I am eager to share my first poem that ive written in a very long time with you. I will post it very soon. But remember, I am a beginner, so go easy on me! Jk.. lol! Thanks again! ♡

Aaahh my dear MisLopez.. didn't you know that a poem manifesting itself is the most purest form of reflection.. when one doesn't have to struggle to get the words to flow, you know it is meant to be written and shared.. the universe has it's own way of communicating, and if we listen carefully we can hear its choir of stars sing to our hearts... I so look forward to reading you again.. impatiently I wait..

thanks for the encouragement!

we go about our busy little lives oblivious to the greater part of reality which is the universe. We are so tiny and fragile. I like this line:


There is a connection between the inner and outer universe that we are only beginning to discover.

How good this is MizLopez! ...It reminds me of Senryu and Haiku, both are beautiful forms of Japanese poetry.

You have managed to convey a profound message with perfect simplicity, not an easy task!...

Here's a link to a short article on Senryu and Haiku that you might enjoy reading...

http://startag.tripod.com/HkSenDiff.html

Looking forward to more from you!

Day Sinner, thank you very much.. I am new to the whole creative writing thing but you all give me great inspiration!!! I appreciate that you took the time to read my work and thank you for the positive response!!!

Leigh, thank you so much.. i have been wanting to try my hand at writing and like I have said before, I have  been inspired by you all on mingle as well as some poet friends I have. And that short poem just poured out of my mind without really even thinking about it... I was thinking about universal consiousness and my dreams...lol Thank you for the link. I will be sure to check it out! Talking about great things Japanese.... there is a really awesome Japanese movie that is called The House of Flying Daggers.. if you get a chance, watch it!! Its a brilliant movie!!! Thanks again for the encouragement!

Tazzops... ♥ Thank You!!!

You are indeed welcome dear lady.
Thank you for sharing.

AndyBe Good , thank you for reading and for your input!!!

mislopez . . . nice!!!! And I can't wait to read yoor work. I'm thinking, judging from this tidbit that you are probably a great poet/writer.

Mig25 thank you for the kind words and support! Its much appreciateted!!!