Topic: Inside of Me
mig25's photo
Mon 12/17/12 02:48 AM
Inside of Me


I inhaled her scent
as it lingered throughout the room
it was like a memory
implanted within soul
so that I would never have to worry
where you were

You are
inside of me
the best part of me
the reason I am alive

Her touch
was like a butterfly’s kiss
soft
subtle
and everlasting
it was more than something for me to hold onto
it was my reason for holding on

You are
my joy my
my heart’s smile
the part of my soul that was perfect

If ever
there was a time
when you did not know
when you had doubts
or was not sure
of how I felt . . . rest assured
you are
inside of me
the best part of me
and the reason I am alive
my everything




no photo
Mon 12/17/12 03:06 AM
If ever
there was a time
when you did not know
when you had doubts
or was not sure
of how I felt . . . rest assured
you are
inside of me
the best part of me
and the reason I am alive
my everything

mig... simply beautiful, sensitive, and touching...flowerforyouthe experience you share of two becoming one... :heart::heart:

yapika's photo
Mon 12/17/12 04:57 AM
awesome one...<3:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
heart touching.. <3

staraviator's photo
Mon 12/17/12 09:58 AM
I liked the simplicity of the poem and the flow.
good show

DaySinner's photo
Mon 12/17/12 10:14 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Mon 12/17/12 10:15 AM

Her touch
was like a butterfly’s kiss
soft
subtle
and everlasting
it was more than something for me to hold onto
it was my reason for holding on

This is really good.
a butterfly's kiss - how did you ever come up with that?
perfect description, conveys so much. everlasting because you dare not try to capture for fear of harming.

no photo
Mon 12/17/12 11:46 AM
As always Mig your words are capturing..

no photo
Mon 12/17/12 11:55 AM
A love song!:heart:

mig25's photo
Mon 12/17/12 09:34 PM


Her touch
was like a butterfly’s kiss
soft
subtle
and everlasting
it was more than something for me to hold onto
it was my reason for holding on

This is really good.
a butterfly's kiss - how did you ever come up with that?
perfect description, conveys so much. everlasting because you dare not try to capture for fear of harming.



Sinner you know I really couldn't tell you where I came up with that line. It just hit me as I was listening to a little jazz. But thanks, I try.

And Ainjel, Leigh, Athena, and yapika thanks too. You know I always appreciate the kind words.