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Inside of Me
I inhaled her scent as it lingered throughout the room it was like a memory implanted within soul so that I would never have to worry where you were You are inside of me the best part of me the reason I am alive Her touch was like a butterfly’s kiss soft subtle and everlasting it was more than something for me to hold onto it was my reason for holding on You are my joy my my heart’s smile the part of my soul that was perfect If ever there was a time when you did not know when you had doubts or was not sure of how I felt . . . rest assured you are inside of me the best part of me and the reason I am alive my everything |
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there was a time when you did not know when you had doubts or was not sure of how I felt . . . rest assured you are inside of me the best part of me and the reason I am alive my everything mig... simply beautiful, sensitive, and touching...the experience you share of two becoming one... |
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awesome one...<3
heart touching.. <3 |
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I liked the simplicity of the poem and the flow.
good show |
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Mon 12/17/12 10:15 AM
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Her touch was like a butterfly’s kiss soft subtle and everlasting it was more than something for me to hold onto it was my reason for holding on This is really good. a butterfly's kiss - how did you ever come up with that? perfect description, conveys so much. everlasting because you dare not try to capture for fear of harming. |
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As always Mig your words are capturing..
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A love song!
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Her touch was like a butterfly’s kiss soft subtle and everlasting it was more than something for me to hold onto it was my reason for holding on This is really good. a butterfly's kiss - how did you ever come up with that? perfect description, conveys so much. everlasting because you dare not try to capture for fear of harming. Sinner you know I really couldn't tell you where I came up with that line. It just hit me as I was listening to a little jazz. But thanks, I try. And Ainjel, Leigh, Athena, and yapika thanks too. You know I always appreciate the kind words. |
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