~JADED~

He said I looked Jaded......... should I have fears? A simple comment stuck in my head for years.
He said I looked Jaded?
And I wonder why???...
Mabye because your words are all really just lies.
The lies that you say are all such disgraces.
Plain as the nose on your shallow *** faces.
Jaded you say???
How observant of you!....
All because of the heartache you put me through...
Jaded??? I thought??
You're probably right...because of this bullsh*t I can't sleep at night.

Jaded am I???
Yes, i'll admit im a dummy, for letting you steal all my hard earned money....
The illusions of your love are just sweeter than honey....
And why can't I resist your masculine ways???
Devalue, demean me, and throw me away....

HEART JADED, SOUL TWISTED, EYES FULL OF TEARS,
A flicker of hope in my sad heart appears....

Jaded???
Not me...I no longer feel blue ,
I found someone else who is kind, loyal and true...

And now the only one in this ***** Jaded is YOU.....

~JADED~BY:Miranda Lopez ~

You go girl!! Righteous write.. love the sarcasm.. the intensity all the way through.. I could feel every word.. awesome talent.. knew you were hiding something under that pretty pic.. good for you...

Good for you girl!

But should I be jealous? Lol

Athena Rose, Thank You!!! I am so happy you liked it!!! You really inspired me with your wonderful talent, to be quiet, pay attention, and search within my soul to find the right words.. I am very grateful to you. And thank you for sharing and inspiring ppl with your talents! Also a thank you to my other talented poet friend Adan B... who told me a few years back that I looked jaded.! Lol, Adan,.. Im not Jaded.. now just inspired by your work...lol.. I hope he is proud of me when he reads my poem..lol

Italian Man, Thank You! Don't be jealous... just be proud cuz that is my first poem in a long time!!! Besides the short one I posted yesterday! Lol.. i've been meaning to express myself through writing to see if I have any talent.. lol Now its your turn! ;)

MisLopez... you honor me with your words... it is my utmost pleasure to inspire you and others to explore your natural talent, your inner voice, and share it to be enjoyed..

welcome aboard.

Thank you kc0003!!!

nice. I like your passion in this one.

thank you very much for the compliment DaySinner!!!