there are loads of forums but really no main spot where many people can im unfortuatly, welcome!

the real question is whether you want fries with that and do you want ti super sized?



good joke

you're welcome always good to see great work, keep it up!

great job! one of the best poems in awhile, good imagery,length, passion and flow.

wanna go for a bite?

it's a bit repetitive and the rhyming is a bit off. it has a good length and meaning in it though.

keep working and you should do great!

thank you guys

I’ve got to break out!.
Gasping for the air and surface.
Breathing to scream out.
Searching for vindication and purpose.
No ones on the same level, the same page.
The bridge to the gap is broken.
As hard as I try I can’t relate.
Apples and oranges, deciphered and unspoken.
Shreds of bliss, comradory and meaning.
The rest loneliness, apathy and torn between.
Mirrors juxtaposed with the world spining.
Tortured with it beyond reach.
The continual, eternal rise and defeat.
Where are the answers,where are the doors?
The questions can’t be dismissed, the longing ignored.
Some day I’ll reach Beyond the borders and boundaries.
Beyond the desert of the real, the desert of destiny.
With opened eyes, in flight with a map and a key.

darn! i knew i shouldn't have taken that bet to run naked with a lot steaks tied to me in the lion pit at the LA zoo. or in other words: ****!

thank you guys, it's great to have your work apreciated.

No psychos please.

LA Mom.

ms teddy bear.

pkh.

if you were about to die what would your last words be?

Love

Encourages life to grow.
Melts away the bitter sorrow & snow.
Brightens up our day.
Helps cast the shadows away.
Uplifting on freedoms wings.
Jumps up & down, laughs and sings.
Constantly evolving but never changing.
Indescribable, yet in every word of light.
A beacon of hope, like stars in the night sky.
Always breathing and pentetrating.
Our hearts, souls, minds and lives.
Rushing, streaming, between wake and dreaming.
Glowing, beaming, gentle screaming, so alive.
So strong and always there.
Never weak or threadbare.
To give through our actions and decisions.
It cannot be taken but only given.
Like doors with different keys.
Each of us with one to unlock & set free.
Universal, eternal, and never-ending potential.
Opening to hallways and dreams.
To find the path and not walk it alone.
To visit a new place and yet be at home.
A lighthouse guiding from land & sea.
Every second is a chance.
For love to dance its dance.
To be free, shown and seen.
In life, in a dream within a dream.

I want love too, the real deep love down to the roots and the core of you and that person. for it's different then lilbugs descirption but i believe everybody has their own defintion of love but there are many fundamental foundations oflove all over the world. i wish everyone luck, i know it's lonely but you've got to keep hope.

you're welcome wolfeyes, it's always great to able to see great work, keep it up!

Really awesome poem, carries the imagination with beautiful imagery

yay!! great job guys, you rose above and beyond my expections and hope. we defintly are the music makers and dreamers of dreams.

we should defintly do anougther one soon.

supercalafragilisticexpealladious.

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.

thats really good i am happy for you... yay!

opps sorry.

n my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul

the heart of shining gold and silver soul