“Lost in Your Words”

As I listen to the words you say.
It seems to make my mind stray.
To a place so quit and bless.
Were life is calm and no stress.
Just like floating out on a lake.
Your words I enjoy and partake.
Like a fine wine.
That sounds so divine.
As I sit here and think how nice.
Your words leave me at peace.
I have a vision of your smile.
That sticks in my mind for awhile.
Makes me think what it would feel.
To be held within your arms of steel.
Within that moment I would surely be lost.
Hugging and kissing to exhaust.
It would be so bless.
Just to feel your sweet kiss.
The moment your lips softly touch.
They will make me want them so much.
Just the thought send chills down my spine.
And thinking how it would be so divine.
Just to be held.
We would meld.
Just like it was meant to be.
And we would be free.
Within each other we would surely be at last.
Lost in the moment of time and surpass.
Anything we have felt before.
As we take the time to explore.
Together we will know how it felt.
Within each others arms just to melt.
And become one.
After all was said and done.
Oh it does seem.
I have gotten lost in a day dream.
As I sit here once again today.
As I think of your words that came my way.

K.L.M
11/24/2007

nice

it's a bit repetitive and the rhyming is a bit off. it has a good length and meaning in it though.

keep working and you should do great!

I've got a kiss and a few words for ya

Hi sweetie! Missin ya lots!

I've missed you...beautiful write and day dream I get lost to in the past but like you always tell me keep dreaming..hugs

thank you all and yes crimsonphoenix your right and I do seee that afterwards but hey it happens at times thanks for letting me know

loca thank you

NPP nice to see you my friend hope all is well hehehe well ya gonna e-mail that kiss and those words lmao miss ya too my friend

pkh miss you too my friend