Topic: Immortal Kiss (Ode to a Vampire) | |
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Oh come to me with blood lust
driven hungry desires~ Let my woman scented charms as I lay in your arms, stoke your simmering blood thirsty fires~ Let your hungry mouth bury deep into this fleshly feast as you partake and savor that which you yearn, ache and burn for.... Lay me out bare, a willing player, in this game of life or death~ Indulge yourself in this silken sensual banquet, aromatic and seasoned for your discriminating palate~ Quench your thirst deeply, caress me hotly, sweetly, as you drink from me, my honeyed nectar flowing from this golden chalice; your holy grail~ Bring me shuddering near to the deep deathly abyss, as my eyes glaze and close in a warm dreamlike bliss~ Satisfy that starved fatal need, as I call out your name, writhe, moan and bleed against your lips so soft, so cool as they entice, ignite, tease and delight my senses~ Mesmerize me, I will call you my master, brand me as yours, suckle me faster ... harder ... deeper~. Bleed me...need me ... Satisfy that impassioned urge, as you gorge yourself on the throat which you purge, of blood; red hot sparked life engulfing,washing over you in warm, sensual waves of pleasure~ Your body shudders and trembles in exquisite bliss, and you rise from me, infused and renewed by this ... ... our Immortal Kiss~ |
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Most beautiful and sensual words - very romantic!
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Most beautiful and sensual words - very romantic! Thank you roadie.... |
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Wow.
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I hope that's a good wow...?
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Yeah. That's a cool poem.
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Yeah. That's a cool poem. thank you.... |
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You're welcome.
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Thank you arian... |
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Covering my neck...
Good discriptive poem! |
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Covering my neck... Good discriptive poem! Thank you darling...shall I send you some Kevlar? |
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You make getting bit on the neck sensuous...that was really good. I'm not a vampire, but will a werewolf do?
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for a moment i lift my face
pungent elongated drops dripping in two places one longer than the other from my upper lip twin small slowly pulsating blood fountains like twin geysers beat to the rhythm of her bleeding heart in stylized violence emerging at her throat from whence an unnaturally hungry mouth has briefly loosed its suckling grasp with two long hot licks one over each opening another agonizingly slow drip falls from the slow motion high speed cinematographic dreams of Quentin Tarantino the dazed tongue of the aggressor too indolent to catch the refugee droplet it swirls greedily in vain ultimately it will not be denied she still tingles there like fully engorged breasts of hot life she leaks for me desperately needing pressure and suction and pressure and suction with a gentle nudge she cannot resist lust drunk as he nuzzles her neck aside again aspiring to satiation while soft full lips delicately and expertly pursed move in time with a sliding tongue he will for forever pull her personal juice forth to mutual delight |
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great job! one of the best poems in awhile, good imagery,length, passion and flow.
wanna go for a bite? |
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tasty
but i still hunger for more..... |
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Suddenly......... I'm hungry!
Hi sweetie! Missin ya bunches |
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VERY ROMANTIC, sensuous..
Got me caught up in it. |
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You make getting bit on the neck sensuous...that was really good. I'm not a vampire, but will a werewolf do? Depends on how hard you bite.... |
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for a moment i lift my face pungent elongated drops dripping in two places one longer than the other from my upper lip twin small slowly pulsating blood fountains like twin geysers beat to the rhythm of her bleeding heart in stylized violence emerging at her throat from whence an unnaturally hungry mouth has briefly loosed its suckling grasp with two long hot licks one over each opening another agonizingly slow drip falls from the slow motion high speed cinematographic dreams of Quentin Tarantino the dazed tongue of the aggressor too indolent to catch the refugee droplet it swirls greedily in vain ultimately it will not be denied she still tingles there like fully engorged breasts of hot life she leaks for me desperately needing pressure and suction and pressure and suction with a gentle nudge she cannot resist lust drunk as he nuzzles her neck aside again aspiring to satiation while soft full lips delicately and expertly pursed move in time with a sliding tongue he will for forever pull her personal juice forth to mutual delight Excellent!! |
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