heres the idea: one person writes a line and then the next poster copies the previous line(s) and adds a new line that must relate to either the last line or overall idea of the previous lines as a whole.

for instance:

the dreams of the stars and the sky.
the beauty of the moon and the dark of the night.

every next line can reveal a new part of the story but it can't be someting that tottaly doesen't fit like:

the dreams of the star and sky.
the beauty of the moon and the dark of the night.
the beavers like to choke on onions.

i hope this doesn't confuse you guys, if your interested it could be a collaborative effort of the many talented writers here. we could let it keep growing or stop at a certain amount of lines, it all depends on what the group wants to do.

if you want me to clarify or have any ideas please let me know. who ever wants to start first lend us a line please.

great idea...try this line...

in my childs eyes i see forever

The never ending pools of wonder

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul

opps sorry.

n my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul

the halo shines with tales untold

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.

A salute to a flag unfurled

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled
As we stand united , strong, and brave

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

through sacrifice of blood and life

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

through sacrifice of blood and life
Hope one day lord we can end this strife

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

through sacrifice of blood and life
Hope one day lord we can end this strife
and emerge from this cold dark night

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

through sacrifice of blood and life
Hope one day lord we can end this strife
and emerge from this cold dark night
and help to bring forth a wonderous light

in my childs eyes i see forever
The never ending pools of wonder
Bright with life and color flowing
The innocence of never knowing

the heart of shining gold and silver soul.
the halo shines with tales untold.
limitless potenial to change the world.
A salute to a flag unfurled

As we stand united , strong, and brave
our children's hope we work to save
from tyrany and mindless hate
and the cold cruel finger of God's fate

through sacrifice of blood and life
Hope one day lord we can end this strife
and emerge from this cold dark night
Cuz you know in your heart, we will never give up the fight

think that says it all right there....good job fellow poets.