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Tue 02/24/09 07:30 PM

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flowers

RawB's photo
Tue 02/24/09 07:30 PM

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flowers

RawB's photo
Tue 02/24/09 03:16 AM
The milk
to grow strong
this life
from infant to
being
The silk
that tightly binds
us together in mothers
quilt
filled will love
away from guilt
and prying eyes
yelling lies
away from wanting
ravens taunting
away from skeletons
and demons of the past
still haunting
The spilt

©Feb.2009 Roberto Loera

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RawB's photo
Sat 02/21/09 07:31 PM
brokenheart
One last kiss
before you go
and fade away
like melting
winter snow

Watering my earth
and creating new birth
as a wild flower
my broken heart
a gift and curse

Forfeit yet
you're worth it
your brains
your bronze
your soft worm
soothing arms

Not just your complexion
but in a world of rules
it's because
you're the exception





RawB's photo
Sat 02/21/09 09:43 AM

:heart: flowerforyou GOD I HATE Disease and DEATH.!!!!!!!

There are many times we all feel lost and some might even THINK their life sucks and wish THEY were dead..

But to be given a TIME PERIOD to remain LIVING is something I hope NO ONE EVER has to HEAR!

But I know there is NO STOPPING life's never ending cycle..


PLEASE GOD HELP THESE PEOPLE AND FRIENDS WITH YOUR GUIDANCE AND LIGHT AS TO HAVE THEM FEEL YOUR LOVE AND COMFORT IN KNOWING THEY WILL LIVE ON THROUGH YOU AND YOUR GIFT OF NEVER ENDING LIFE THROUGH THEIR DEPARTURE FROM THIS WORLD,AMEN.


I WILL PRAY FOR THIS WORLD AND EVERYONE TO LIVE WITHOUT DISEASE
IN ITS FUTURE AND ALL OF OURS.:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
My you all be blessed with good health and the warmth of family and friends to be apart of your lives to help you through all your times of struggles and pains..flowerforyou
Amen

RawB's photo
Sat 02/21/09 09:39 AM
Straight up, no rocks.
Awesome work.
I greatly enjoyed reading this, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
A+++

RawB's photo
Sat 02/21/09 09:34 AM
Now that's what Im talking about bigsmile
A+++

RawB's photo
Wed 02/18/09 06:11 AM
Drip drop
the sound of rain
stimulation
smell and thought
wet sandy feet
waves of memories
once forgot

Though you tread along
this place fills you with comfort
this place is nearly home
washing away the hurt
...
because you deserve it
you're flawed like a masterpiece
you're simply just perfect

Drip drop
holding out your hands
and sticking out your tongue
smelling of pine tree tops
in neverland
where you will always be young

Comfort color of blue
and when I gaze upon it
I'll always think of you
who set the tide
you who took my mind
and stretched it wide
who washed away the pride
and made me feel more
made me feel
alive






:Roberto Loera
©Feb.2009





RawB's photo
Wed 02/18/09 05:37 AM
You blow my mind every time.....
it's as if you hack my database bigsmile
One of my favorites thus far.
I'm going to read it a couple more times before I trip out in heavy thought for the next six hours about it, because I loved it that much:heart:
You're kung fu is strong

RawB's photo
Wed 02/18/09 05:27 AM
Edited by RawB on Wed 02/18/09 05:28 AM

Cool Write Rawb drinker

I have a title.

Title: Guiding Missed Souls

bigsmile

Not that you have to name it that. But if I wrote that poem that is the title I would have used, lol.









I like that, it fits.
Thank you for reading, and giving the suggestion drinker

RawB's photo
Tue 02/17/09 07:07 AM

Heck NO! That was amazing and as my jaw drops to the floor, I cannot come up with words to describe its beauty. Great job but sorry, no name.

~Kristi
biggrin Thank you so much

RawB's photo
Tue 02/17/09 07:01 AM


Amazing, simply amazing.
Awesome write!


Thanks Raw....I sort of thought you'd like this one and Im glad you do~:heart:
Absolutely.

RawB's photo
Tue 02/17/09 06:13 AM
:thumbsup: flowers

RawB's photo
Tue 02/17/09 06:10 AM
If i was to write a guide
on how to be a man

it would not sell
unless to those pure hearted
who did not understand

but IF I was to write a guide
on how to be a good man

it also would not sell
For how am I to know
if I am justified in writing
something I do not understand

unless to those
who also do not understand
falling victim into deceitful hands

Who should come first
what to say
how to feel and quench the thirst
on soft hands they should lay
times like today
wither me away
as my innocence falls pray
to the times
decay

Not so long ago

attractions were attained by all
size 14
Cup size B braw

Handsome face
and a little chase
no man nor woman
would think to forfeit
on the game or race

easy pickens

but now
HOW we have changed
our point of view
what's new
what we fit into
what we should be
NOT what we can do

we invent things to help us?
a mind frame to vanquish
and blind ashes to ashes
dust to dust
disgust
bronze tans
and metal men shall rust
and be forgotten
before days end
before dawns dusk

I hold my head a weep
for now I only dream of you
with doubt in my heart
and fear in my soul
if we should never meet

or have we already?
perhaps I didn't see you
blinded by attraction
thoughts too heavy
can barely hold them steady
flying through the air
in small pieces as if confetti
What has happened?

When I was a little boy
they would read to me stories
and rather playing with cheap toys
I dreamt of you standing before me

but now
that little boy is gone
how fading vibrations
disappear from a song
once sung

I write
to spite it all
how stories built up
on stone walls and fall

A guide on how to be a man
humbug

A man is only whole
once that void has been filled
once all the trust has been spilled
all deceit killed
when two people meet
and form one soul
that's real

Not frail, but strong
colorful, not pale
on storm water seas
set sail


:Roberto Loera
©Feb.2009

Anyone care to name this one?


















RawB's photo
Tue 02/17/09 05:07 AM
Amazing, simply amazing.
Awesome write!

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 06:01 PM










I could be your druggie
to hug me - love me - Show me
You want me

Free me - Buy me - Spit on me
Dump me

Love dead Loving - Used and Lost
Nobody wanting - Ankles in cuffs



bigsmile drinker I like

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:59 PM
You stand tempting
gravities edge
taunting us
teetering on it's ledge

If you should fall
and nets brake
we would answer the call
and create for you
a new fate

If my arms should shatter
know that one by one
we here would catch you
as steps on a ladder

The skies are blue
perfect day to fly
so what say you
you up there
how is the view
care to give it a try?







RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:29 PM


It's quiet now
my ears are ringing
no Valentine
but many memories
still worth remembering

Three games of pool
two drinks per game
no one there
could remember me name

Drove too far to see a band
venue slash bar
went on first
we missed them
damn

huge breasts
invading my space
not sure if any of those women
really even had a face

Wet restroom floors
graffiti marked doors
drunken
man whores
violent female roars
liquers sweating out
of every persons pores

Last call!

A smile or two
is that for me
of course it's not
you can barely see
enjoy your hangover
and that hard ice tea
what's that baby..
oh
the restroom's over there

One last cigarette
no thanks I'm done
well everyone
it's been almost fun
but now that the room is spinning
I can almost taste that rum
again
stick with the soft drinks
that I'll recommend

But before I go
and this thought slips my mind
to everyone I missed
happy Valentine
and if you missed me
I was lost in a vast winding sea
yet none the less
happy V.D
sincerely me: RawB


:Roberto Loera
Feb.15 ©2009







Sounds like every girls' Valentine dream (laughing)

So glad to see you survived the night Raw....Happy Belated Valentines Day and thank you for putting a smile on my face with this one~excellent~:heart:
I'm glad I could make you smile bigsmile

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:28 PM

RUM! woot woot!

Good stuff man. And happy late V day
Thank you and cheers drinker drinks

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:27 PM

Happy Belated Valentines to you..Nice writings..
Thank you bigsmile