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Passionate Kisses
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I'm going to tell you a story It's been written before the only difference is it doesn't hurt to write it now No not anymore I used to have passionate kisses upside down our lips would fit together like zing-zang pieces ones that squeaked and made funny noises soft ones like full blooming petals from scarlet Roses The stars were brighter back then and we would pretend that all those stars were only ours but all good things must come to an end then all that's left is purple scars and only time to let them mend Time sped by when her and I saw eye to eye we only knew white lies and butterflies and.. love my heart fluttered as if a dove how naive was I to place all faith in love when a wraith named lust could easily blow me away like red hot sulfur had burned me to dust Didn't she know that only tin men rust I thought she knew that love was trust how can I go on selfishly she said I must Fine then.. Block out the light for now the world will only see me counting stars alone at night a ghost of mine left behind but I will be alright Come closer here and listen with both ears forget me now I wish to disappear so long our crystal Christmas's farewell our wishing well wishes and I will miss you most of all our passionate upside down kisses... By: Roberto Loera a soft warmth as lips meet and taste sweet anticipation a soft gasp tongues flickering fast lightly dancing briefly a heightened introduction to pleasures forthcoming is this ... ... our first kiss <<-----inserting big kissy face emoticon here....   I really like your addition, and thank you for that
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for hopefulhoffman
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I bet. I could only imagine how it feels to be accused of plagiarism, especially when the write is of such quality. well thank you for that... i am not sure if i should be mad at the accusation or the fact that it was compared to the piece he posted as the original... 
oh, and welcome to the zoo... 
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for hopefulhoffman
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I bet.
I could only imagine how it feels to be accused of plagiarism, especially when the write is of such quality. |
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Be Strong
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BE STRONG The trails of thought bring me to yesterday An everlasting love One in which I can't grasp Quietly tucked away In my heart I chose this path The rainbow of hope In your eyes Lies behind me Such a shimmering Radiant light A beacon to myself Who I was When I loved How I believed Now I remind myself Move on, go forth So easy to say Heartbreaking to do No argument solves Feelings so deep Retracing steps Rethinking thoughts Nothing stops An everlasting love Which resides in the soul It's there as are memories Of my beloved father Forever a part of me His words live on Be strong Just be strong SDF Jan 23. 2009 
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MY " IF "
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: heart:   
MY " IF " IF your photo Radiates a thousand smiles Then why can"t I, Radiate my smiles to you. Your smiles will never show The you I"ve come to know. And IF your face could launch a thousand glances, Do I fool myself, for your, loving advances. Theres no other here but you, In my dreams,my thoughts, my heart too. And when my love, my life has almost flew, Will you come, Will you come to me, and breathe my life anew. IF a man could be two places, two places at one time, I"d be with you, Tomorrow and today, with you, forever and a day. If the heavens should ever stop moving, the earth would surely fade away. I"d spend all my time, with you, beside you I would lay. And when the world was through, and all the stars gone, from the sky, Then you, and I , would surely, together, love and die. RAYMOND. 23/01/09 
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You remind me of the ocean Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.
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Hands
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I have artist’s hands, speckled with the many colors of paint, but mostly with the putrid colors of gray charcoal and Pete moss. You can see the brown tar of cigarettes on my knuckles and the nails on my peace fingers. When not in use they are plump with fluid trying to heal the rapid movement that cripples digits; when working they are slim and delicate with knuckles swollen from too much cracking, the early onset of arthritis. They are the hands of a thief, stealing souls and putting them in pictures. They are the hands of a glutton and a lover, the decadent life of art. They are sinful hands, stained by living evil. They tremble on the wheel and I cannot hold my grip. Ashes and the cherry fall and burn a circle into the floor, the ashes of reincarnation,the circle of life. They are bruised broken stained and swollen, but they are mine. They hold the truth of my life and the power of my mind.
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Topic:
Who are you?? Continued
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This looks like the place to be.
Awesome write ((LAMom)) and everyone that's added. |
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Passionate Kisses
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I'm going to tell you a story It's been written before the only difference is it doesn't hurt to write it now No not anymore I used to have passionate kisses upside down our lips would fit together like zing-zang pieces ones that squeaked and made funny noises soft ones like full blooming petals from scarlet Roses The stars were brighter back then and we would pretend that all those stars were only ours but all good things must come to an end then all that's left is purple scars and only time to let them mend Time sped by when her and I saw eye to eye we only knew white lies and butterflies and.. love my heart fluttered as if a dove how naive was I to place all faith in love when a wraith named lust could easily blow me away like red hot sulfur had burned me to dust Didn't she know that only tin men rust I thought she knew that love was trust how can I go on selfishly she said I must Fine then.. Block out the light for now the world will only see me counting stars alone at night a ghost of mine left behind but I will be alright Come closer here and listen with both ears forget me now I wish to disappear so long our crystal Christmas's farewell our wishing well wishes and I will miss you most of all our passionate upside down kisses... By: Roberto Loera |
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Love Like That
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Santa Maria!!
This was too fun to read, awesome write.
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Capital
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speaking volumes with so little words- what talent.
I L-ean O-ver V-ital E-lements Y-ell O-ut U-ndone A-llow L-eadership W-illingly A-ttained Y-esterdays S-laves A-mongst N-eedy D-rones F-arewell O-bsolete R-acism E-mpty V-oices E-xhausted R-age |
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THE BEST SEX EVER
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yes, I am with you and bowing down to say BRAVO, I agree and I like very much 
 aww shucks, You're too kind
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Topic:
THE BEST SEX EVER
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Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn now thats good As I was reading it (( out loud ))) My voice just kept getting louder and louder,, Bravoooooooooooooooooooooo 
Thank you kindly 
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Topic:
THE BEST SEX EVER
Edited by
RawB
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Fri 01/23/09 10:37 AM
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MsWizard
[And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!] I was hoping you would read this one
Mystique42 [totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ]  
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Topic:
THE BEST SEX EVER
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you just friggin piss me off 
<quote> i... like... that... <endquote>
 I'm glad you like it
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THE BEST SEX EVER
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ok, i like this one...
it's all about the words and the freedom to use and abuse them...the meaning can be subjective at best and that's when they are usually the best. nice piece...
I appreciate it
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Capital
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Capital
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very good
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Capital
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'Farewell Obsolete Racism Empty Voices Exhausted Rage' Brilliant.
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Topic:
THE BEST SEX EVER
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Oral fixation
I hate everyone so it's not racism blind def and dumb I'm a miss communication also a patriot only for the other Nations call me what you will I'm an illusion and only you think I'm real I bend words to my advantage so you must take your words for granted I sculpt and shape and relocate then try my best to irritate tHe EnGliSh majors WiTH the Very WordS THat theY MoST faVor Hate Me Love Me Love Me Hate Me You're still sitting there reading criticizing pondering and debating how I use these words more than twice because it's so infuriating A literary tragedy if words had laws Id be charged for heresy alphabetical blasphemy There's no rhythm or a reason Before the scholar hierarchy on account of treason Id be found guilty My sentence structure is absolutely filthy are you still with me me lets sing a symphony mi doe re mi fa so la ti doe Don't mind my alter ego a singing psycho LISTEN UP my last words I'll write slow Some.. times.. you.. just.. have.. to.. let.. go.. and stop painting snow the background if you didn't know and read the words that helped us grow Shakespeare Parker of course the Poe Lets keep it real not all of us have the best of writing skill the savvy my lads to write a Jack and Jill But.... we can still have our pales and print upon paper our tales just remember everyone that sex sales sex sales sex sales |
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