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Conjure me up a poem baby
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It's quiet now
my ears are ringing no Valentine but many memories still worth remembering Three games of pool two drinks per game no one there could remember me name Drove too far to see a band venue slash bar went on first we missed them damn huge breasts invading my space not sure if any of those women really even had a face Wet restroom floors graffiti marked doors drunken man whores violent female roars liquers sweating out of every persons pores Last call! A smile or two is that for me of course it's not you can barely see enjoy your hangover and that hard ice tea what's that baby.. oh the restroom's over there One last cigarette no thanks I'm done well everyone it's been almost fun but now that the room is spinning I can almost taste that rum again stick with the soft drinks that I'll recommend But before I go and this thought slips my mind to everyone I missed happy Valentine and if you missed me I was lost in a vast winding sea yet none the less happy V.D sincerely me: RawB :Roberto Loera Feb.15 ©2009 |
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Danger
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Man o man this was great.
Lots of great lines that punch you in the brain, great read.  
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This Dreamworld
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A poem of few words, but endless thoughts and pictures.
High five. 
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*** Solitude ***
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I really like this one, it makes me happy.
Good stuff 
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neglect
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That's raw, I like it, great visuals
 
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Catching Ken Up
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LOOK, IT'S A BIRD, IT'S A PLANE, NO IT's..... it's the bar that MsWiz is setting...
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Dream Stream
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Baby don't go
baby don't go In these dreams chasing you running in slow, motion drinking you in like potent love potion, tasting your lips fantom tongue riffs, playing music bliss I miss this first kiss, butterfly goodnight waking up and you're not here No I'm not alright, baby don't go cold as snow your my sun you help me grow woe, is me baby don't go save me from me Mr.crazy giving up on it all so lazy, you can't help me though I know enable me and I'll never let go, just a little bit please I'm on my hands and knees, these tears are real baby I'm the real deal whisper lovely nothings nibbling on your ear-lobe, holding my breath so as to not blow out your eardrum you're gone baby my chest is numb, baby don't run this game isn't fun just come, before this dream is is.. baby don't go :Roberto Loera ©2009 I need some feedback on how I can improve this. Don't worry about my feelings, I really want to make this one the best it can be, lay it on me. |
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A Fag Every Hour
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..................... ...hidden must.... Picture........be blind Falling in .. between the cracks of time ............Getting Lost.. in the confines of my own under stimulated mind ....Grinding calcium.. .......horizontal vibrating lines ........Typing words.. confusing structure rhymes ....................... ............... We more me precariously use Picture Poetry blur your eyes authority I don't care if you cant see what I see, this to me is comedy and a gift for you who jumped the gun and had the audacity to even try and pity me I laugh to myself with much glee over this vulgarity speech nor word is free in such a place as this community for talk of reality should be dealt with the upmost sensitivity :by Roberto Loera ©2009/A Fag Every Hour/ --> This Side Up Have missed you nice to see you back and speaking so clearly 
Sorry if I was gone too long Mom, been figuring out a few things. Missed you to. Looking forward to your feedback Kc |
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A Fag Every Hour
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Thank you for sharing this!
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Letting Go (of my youth)
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Why can’t I Turn my back On the world Screaming “**** you Go away Life is short Little more Than a very Long day~ Could you get out my head please? 
I love this piece, you're awesome. I'm going to read it a couple more times just to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Thank you~I think you're pretty awesome too. As a matter of fact, I like being in your head. Do you mind if I move my papasan chair in here? 
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Couple Random Picture Poems
Edited by
RawB
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Tue 02/10/09 12:46 PM
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∑==The Arrow Flew Though The Air=•◊
still __Step __∫trong ____§tones _______Slope _________Steady ______________& ______________Steep |
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Letting Go (of my youth)
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Why can’t I
Turn my back On the world Screaming “**** you Go away Life is short Little more Than a very Long day~ Could you get out my head please?
I love this piece, you're awesome. I'm going to read it a couple more times just to make sure I didn't miss anything.
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A Fag Every Hour
Edited by
RawB
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Tue 02/10/09 11:25 AM
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...hidden must.... Picture........be blind Falling in .. between the cracks of time ............Getting Lost.. in the confines of my own under stimulated mind ....Grinding calcium.. .......horizontal vibrating lines ........Typing words.. confusing structure rhymes ....................... ............... We more me precariously use Picture Poetry blur your eyes authority I don't care if you cant see what I see, this to me is comedy and a gift for you who jumped the gun and had the audacity to even try and pity me I laugh to myself with much glee over this vulgarity speech nor word is free in such a place as this community for talk of reality should be dealt with the upmost sensitivity :by Roberto Loera ©2009/A Fag Every Hour/ --> This Side Up |
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Very Short Poem
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when all that`s left is lust,
I will fall to nothing but ash and dust, in love my life I trust. I might work on this... |
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Taken Too Soon
Edited by
RawB
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Sun 01/25/09 09:18 PM
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((You should have probably started a new thread and not hijack this one. ((Kc)) has one up already regarding this issue or debate))
as to the poem  Heart wrenching, I am sorry for your loss.
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A Fog
Edited by
RawB
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Sun 01/25/09 08:45 PM
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A Fog The clouded milky veil saturated that space you know, that place where inhale and exhale stays like your shadow. The day moon wore her veil awaiting for the groom to lift it and place his known presence on her waiting lips changing their demeanor to blazing and bright again and new lifetime. From behind I watched just as others had in my time watched her shoulders rise and fall as the rain welled up from her depth and relinquished to present without his presence. Once he walked the aisle toward her with strides of youth and hope now only remember holds her hand. Night moon will remove the veil in his right place and will scatter that which can only light the pervasive darkness. Raine Les 1/24/2009 Loved it, it made my mind drift off into day dreams
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Please, just say it!
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Amen Brother, I loved it, I've lost way too many friends who never said their peace, so now I lead by example and tell everyone close to me what they mean to me.
Awesome write
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THE BEST SEX EVER
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MsWizard [And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!] I was hoping you would read this one 
Mystique42 [totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ] 
Honey Im reading all your stuff and I dont say that about many people...  awwww you called me honey hehe I'm flattered, I just hope I'm writing fairly decent stuff and not C-rap haha
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Passionate Kisses
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very nice raw
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Passionate Kisses
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Very nice Roberto. I think many of us have been here and felt like this at some point. Lots of great lines in this piece. My Fav, Didn't she know that only tin men rust. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was pretty happy with that line when it popped in my head. Thank you for reading
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