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Flora
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The sweet embrace of sleep overcomes my weary body Dreams A hazy vision coming to me Of the silent stream Gently shielded by the majestic oaks Underneath The goldenrods yeilding to flower Slowly, they open Exposing the tender blooms To the springtime air But one A single stalk Awaits to open Until the radiant sun Has slipped beyond sight When the cool night air Rustles the gnarled oak And the goldenrods sway Waiting.... For night to draw near.  awesome
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Topic:
My Lovely Nothing
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Topic:
My Lovely Nothing
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Send me to my grave, my keeper weeps upon my cold feet, for a reaper has taken her slave, when married men misbehave, naive are we to understand the full plan given, and out as flickering candles go out without a heart beat, we all fall down while pretending we could control the waters, washed away by the waves, skin is cold and gray on the warmest of a summers day, I pray you drink sweet honey due, forget about sorrows now long since past, love of this taboo, how could you, how could I, sneaking in shadows away from peeping eyes, lay with me once more, and kiss guilty poisoned lips goodbye, slip into the abyss with one more forbidden kiss, my mistress, my lover, how I wish this, my wife, my downfall that crashes more fierce than rampant waterfalls, and pierces flesh with sharpened talon claws, our time was false, though I ponder this when stiff old saps learn to relax and become youth, we would dance as the leaves float on wind, potpourri scents spoke to us truth, only testimonies rapped twice over to form my noose, set free our messenger dove, and remember our story no more, my everything, my nothing, my love whom I adore. By: Roberto Loera I've got my eye on you and your work Mister *smile* 
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Topic:
Walking Alone
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Feeling it bro.
"so take a walk with me, thrue these eyes i see, blazing hatred and fake @ss theory's, false philosophy, false prophecy, statements that occurred with hating peoples like you and me, such ideology, full blown capacity, never the less i walk alone with no one guiding me, i hate to see this path in some one elses eyes but mines, cause only God knows and can judge me on the decisions so divine...." This has a great structure, like domino's... keep at it and keep knocking'em down.
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Topic:
Death Reserved
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I like it bro, kinda hard to pic up on the rhythm in a few spots and how you're saying it, but for the most part it flows well.
I would rather hear you spit it on track though, but that's just me. keep at it. Good write
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Topic:
My Lovely Nothing
Edited by
RawB
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Mon 01/19/09 04:24 PM
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Topic:
My Lovely Nothing
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<<< Becoming a Hugeeeeeeeeeeee fan 
 Thank you, anymore comments like this and I'll have trouble picking my head up off the ground
I just caught this poem by accident. The writing is really, really good. I am struggling finding a compliment worthy of your wonderful poem. I CAN write that I FELT something reading it. I hope I can continue to entertain you with my writings. Thank you again
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My Lovely Nothing
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<<< Becoming a Hugeeeeeeeeeeee fan
Thank you, anymore comments like this and I'll have trouble picking my head up off the ground
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A+++
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solitary dancer
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<img src="http://www.csc.gov.sg/HTML/Newsletter/dec2006/decpictures/annadance.jpg">
Good stuff
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My Lovely Nothing
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WOW, really good. Thank you
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Topic:
My Lovely Nothing
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Send me to my grave,
my keeper weeps upon my cold feet, for a reaper has taken her slave, when married men misbehave, naive are we to understand the full plan given, and out as flickering candles go out without a heart beat, we all fall down while pretending we could control the waters, washed away by the waves, skin is cold and gray on the warmest of a summers day, I pray you drink sweet honey due, forget about sorrows now long since past, love of this taboo, how could you, how could I, sneaking in shadows away from peeping eyes, lay with me once more, and kiss guilty poisoned lips goodbye, slip into the abyss with one more forbidden kiss, my mistress, my lover, how I wish this, my wife, my downfall that crashes more fierce than rampant waterfalls, and pierces flesh with sharpened talon claws, our time was false, though I ponder this when stiff old saps learn to relax and become youth, we would dance as the leaves float on wind, potpourri scents spoke to us truth, only testimonies rapped twice over to form my noose, set free our messenger dove, and remember our story no more, my everything, my nothing, my love whom I adore. By: Roberto Loera |
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Topic:
poncho
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Topic:
Are You Wet Yet?
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high five
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Topic:
Rise To The Occasion
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A+++
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(What Am I?”
:By Roberto Loera I was once beautiful and strong, Something worth singing, Something worth a song, Something once right Something now wrong, I was once beautiful and strong. (My Little Toy Boat) :By Roberto Loera Float my little toy boat, I spent all day making you, Little white sails made of paper and glue, I even put on my little sailor coat, Just to come and play with you, Please float my little toy boat, That’s all I want you to do, I worked so hard to make you brand new, Mommy I don’t feel so good, I think I have a little flu, I’m sorry my little toy boat, I can’t come and play with you, Mommy was sad when she read the doctors note, I don’t know why she feels so blue, She says I have to keep up hope, And then I can go and play with you, So until then my little toy boat, I made for you a little paper crew. |
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Topic:
if you dont love me
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pisses in the pool
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Topic:
rate yourself
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What are we rating ourselves on, personality, looks or everything?
Looks= 6 personality= 8 overall= 8.5 
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