I get it
why I'm here

trapped
on this thing

I write
ignite

take flight
fall
crash and

never learn

relaxed firm

smacking burn

schmucky nerd

lacking words

I'm here
for me

Not you

Don't be confused

I lose
I lost
I paid the cost

of admission
at retail

trapped
in my shell

A hermit

a nerd with

no hope

no rope

minus cares

better off

without me
here

Where I
see

The real
me

That I didn't
see

That she could
see

without me

there

I am
here

you
are
there

Let go of my hair

keep my air

I belong

where?

I didn't belong

there

Cool prose...

reminds me of a line from a song...Who are we?...you J are simply priceless.

That was great. It brought me in and kept me there....I feel

Maybe you didn't beloong there but you do belong here...
(((J))) you are my friend and that means you belong in my heart also

the real you = FRIEND

Straight up, no rocks.
Awesome work.
I greatly enjoyed reading this, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
A+++

Thank You!
RawB
Vicki
Frenchfry
Ainjel
pkd

really enjoyed,glad you are here

thank you pkh

"I am
here

you
are
there

Let go of my hair

keep my air

I belong

where?

I didn't belong

there"


Great ending Sweet J...if we know where we don't belong this clarity can shine such Light on where we do!

I too, am humbled by this write