Drip drop
the sound of rain
stimulation
smell and thought
wet sandy feet
waves of memories
once forgot

Though you tread along
this place fills you with comfort
this place is nearly home
washing away the hurt
...
because you deserve it
you're flawed like a masterpiece
you're simply just perfect

Drip drop
holding out your hands
and sticking out your tongue
smelling of pine tree tops
in neverland
where you will always be young

Comfort color of blue
and when I gaze upon it
I'll always think of you
who set the tide
you who took my mind
and stretched it wide
who washed away the pride
and made me feel more
made me feel
alive






:Roberto Loera
©Feb.2009

what great lines and a wonderful sentiment...well done!!!

Great write. Everybody needs a Peter Pan influence in their life.