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shock waves of emotion
too much intensity your loving lays waste to my sensibilities. What was that feeling? what could it be? did God take a photograph? It's not mine to see. Like a moth to the flame your light makes shadow of me in an flash I was gone. who am I? I don't know. i descend into madness until... only love remains. |
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love this daysinner, although i tend to:
descend into love until... only madness remains. ...more!! |
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love this daysinner, although i tend to: descend into love until... only madness remains. ...more!! LOL! Thank you. |
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nice write
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Wed 11/28/12 11:20 PM
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nice write Thank you penny |
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I really like this poem
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What bastet said....
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Love can change everything, Sinner.. it can make a blind man see.. intensity can set him free...
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Very well done. Love the imagery. And I think that bastet had a very poignant comment. Haha. I think I do the same thing.
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love this daysinner, although i tend to: descend into love until... only madness remains. ...more!! you know, the more I think about it the more I agree. It just sounds better and feels more passionate that way. I hope you don't mind me stealing your idea. Thank you! |
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love this daysinner, although i tend to: descend into love until... only madness remains. ...more!! you know, the more I think about it the more I agree. It just sounds better and feels more passionate that way. I hope you don't mind me stealing your idea. Thank you! you're welcome! |
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