Topic: In an Instant
DaySinner's photo
Wed 11/28/12 04:02 PM
shock waves of emotion
too much intensity
your loving lays waste
to my sensibilities.

What was that feeling?
what could it be?
did God take a photograph?
It's not mine to see.

Like a moth to the flame
your light makes shadow of me
in an flash I was gone.
who am I? I don't know.

i descend into madness until...
only love remains.


bastet126's photo
Wed 11/28/12 04:06 PM
love this daysinner, although i tend to:

descend into love until...
only madness remains.

...more!!

DaySinner's photo
Wed 11/28/12 04:59 PM

love this daysinner, although i tend to:

descend into love until...
only madness remains.

...more!!



LOL!

Thank you.

pennyg281's photo
Wed 11/28/12 08:10 PM
flowerforyou nice write

DaySinner's photo
Wed 11/28/12 11:20 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Wed 11/28/12 11:20 PM

flowerforyou nice write


Thank you penny

mig25's photo
Wed 11/28/12 11:21 PM
I really like this poem

no photo
Thu 11/29/12 12:17 AM
What bastet said....

no photo
Thu 11/29/12 01:29 AM
Love can change everything, Sinner.. it can make a blind man see.. intensity can set him free... flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 12/01/12 09:12 PM
Very well done. Love the imagery. And I think that bastet had a very poignant comment. Haha. I think I do the same thing.

DaySinner's photo
Sat 12/01/12 10:18 PM

love this daysinner, although i tend to:

descend into love until...
only madness remains.

...more!!


you know, the more I think about it the more I agree. It just sounds better and feels more passionate that way. I hope you don't mind me stealing your idea. Thank you!

bastet126's photo
Thu 12/06/12 03:12 PM


love this daysinner, although i tend to:

descend into love until...
only madness remains.

...more!!


you know, the more I think about it the more I agree. It just sounds better and feels more passionate that way. I hope you don't mind me stealing your idea. Thank you!


:wink: you're welcome!