Topic:
Untangled
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Thanks for reading. Inspired by one of my favorite songs.
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Topic:
Untangled
Edited by
tayah12
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Sat 02/16/13 07:38 PM
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As I awaken
I am listening The only heart beat I'm hearing is my own it's broken rhythmic beating Overwhelms me I'm alone We're untangled Is this happening Did we untangle our souls In the darkness I can't see you Was last night the final straw Its my pride She won't let me Admit I love you too Three words meek My actions speak What my tongue has yet to say It's a nightmare I'm sure you're there I'll awaken Tangled up with you |
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Topic:
There Is No Cure
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Topic:
Small Sacrifices...
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Leigh I've read this five times and I know I'll read it again. Its so magnetic for me. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!! Thank you.
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Topic:
"I Cry Out"...
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beautifully written. Leigh
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Topic:
Be
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There is nothing like just being...Nice write Tayah.. I'm just starting to understand that. Its great |
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Topic:
It's Hard
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She obviously has a father who loves her endlessly. Very special.
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Topic:
Be
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Just be still
Be here in this moment In this place with me I've planned this Perfectly So you couldn't run, escape, flee from me If you pull away I'll draw you back to me If you fall asleep you'll still awaken to me When there's no where to run And no place to hide You'll have to let go And fall into me Rest on my chest Letting me caress The emotions You try So hard To suppress See I've planned this Ever so perfectly My plan is to teach you To simply be Whoever you are Its okay with me |
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Topic:
winter solstice
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Holding her hand as she bleeds, blood he's causing. Appears to be helping but really hurting. Beautiful.
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Topic:
Even When
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Mmmm...I have to figure out how to find some of that! Maybe not on mingle
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Topic:
i swear
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This isn't love I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear Yeah . . . dude better not try to contact you!!! Nice poem Rotfl I'll keep you posted if he does! |
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Topic:
Ok I so I started this
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Checkmate
She bows down at the feet of her king submission in the best way watching him conquer every square inch of her kingdom |
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Topic:
Heartstrings
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Breathtakingly beautiful write. When I read the words I could hear it as a song in my head.
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Topic:
Rock, Paper, Scissors
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Suspenseful write. I'm still sitting here with my hand clasped over my mouth.
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Topic:
bipolar
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Pulsing rhythm hunting my involuntary thoughts
This is such an artistically profound depiction of what it is to be bipolar. Fantastic write. |
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Topic:
i swear
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Thanks guys.
Leigh Bastet...I'm glad u like it! |
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Topic:
i swear
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This isn't love
I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear |
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Edited by
tayah12
on
Tue 02/05/13 06:05 PM
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That love song is what makes us preserver through the sting of love. The feelings of love out weight the fear eventually.then the heart is ready to risk it again.
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Topic:
The Fall
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Love the imagery Cas. And your format makes the write even more outstanding.
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Topic:
Ok I so I started this
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Waves rolling
continuously The atmosphere surrounding The only two beings in existence Morpheus now a tsunami This relief Nothing like that of her own touch Her fragile finger tip incapable of sustaining That primal fire That's now ablaze |
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