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Topic: i swear
tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Tue 02/05/13 10:47 PM
This isn't love I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Tue 02/05/13 10:58 PM
Well said MS Always be strong and do what is right for YOU ! Peace ! KiK

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 02/05/13 11:30 PM
This isn't love I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear Being broken emotionally... to me that's the worst... takes longer to heal, if it ever does... this piece is awesome, no fear...

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 02/06/13 08:34 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 02/06/13 08:46 AM
If everyone handled adversity as well as you do, the world would be a better place....You continue to impress young lady!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 02/06/13 06:11 PM
you write real tayah, it doesn't get any better than that, peace :)

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Wed 02/06/13 08:55 PM
Thanks guys. Leigh Bastet...I'm glad u like it!

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1542	Thu 02/07/13 08:47 PM
This isn't love I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear Yeah . . . dude better not try to contact you!!! Nice poem

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Fri 02/08/13 10:38 AM
This isn't love I don't know what it is But.... This isn't love Since you can't touch me Not physically at least You've figured out how To brake every little piece of me Emotionally I've never been this weak But I'm not the same Brokenhearted little girl Refuse to be your victim So I've closed the door Turned the lock And tossed away the key I dare you try to contact me This time I'll fight back I'll go for blood I swear Yeah . . . dude better not try to contact you!!! Nice poem Rotfl I'll keep you posted if he does!

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