Topic: Ok I so I started this
mig25's photo
Fri 02/01/13 02:56 AM
Edited by mig25 on Fri 02/01/13 02:59 AM
Ok so I started this poem titled "Tonight"; now I would love for the wonderful Mingle2 poets to add to it. In other words, let's make this a long night . . . interested in where it will lead to. And laura, yes you laura (you know who you are), I would love for you to write something as well since you are the inspiration for a lot of my work. So can anyone help me finish this?

Tonight


If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty


threepurpleroses's photo
Fri 02/01/13 06:57 PM
Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.


mig25's photo
Sat 02/02/13 02:31 PM

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.




Nice one threepurple . . . now let's see if we can get others to keep the night going

no photo
Sat 02/02/13 03:04 PM

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.



naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

no photo
Sat 02/02/13 07:19 PM
If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking



no photo
Sat 02/02/13 11:54 PM

If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking


As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips

mig25's photo
Sun 02/03/13 03:30 AM


If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking


As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly


no photo
Sun 02/03/13 04:26 AM



If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking


As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly




Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words

threepurpleroses's photo
Sun 02/03/13 08:11 PM




If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking


As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly




Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly



Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words



Moans escape
And legs entwine.
Forever, it seems,
Entangled with time.

A little touch here
A little touch there,
Engages such feelings
That each would share.

Thoughts are gone
As time transcends,
Magic feelings
Rule this reign.

The want,the need,
That each one has,
Can only be fulfilled
As each one shares.

They give into the powerful surge,
As they unite, their feelings merge.
Until they give it all they have.
And, blasting rockets do emerge.

They soar up to
the heavens above,
As each one
wants and needs to love.

They climb into the clouds it seems,
As each one gives into the dreams.
Of being loved with all you got.
Those little touches mean a lot.




tayah12's photo
Mon 02/04/13 12:01 PM





If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking


As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly




Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words



She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly



Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words



Moans escape
And legs entwine.
Forever, it seems,
Entangled with time.

A little touch here
A little touch there,
Engages such feelings
That each would share.

Thoughts are gone
As time transcends,
Magic feelings
Rule this reign.

The want,the need,
That each one has,
Can only be fulfilled
As each one shares.

They give into the powerful surge,
As they unite, their feelings merge.
Until they give it all they have.
And, blasting rockets do emerge.

They soar up to
the heavens above,
As each one
wants and needs to love.

They climb into the clouds it seems,
As each one gives into the dreams.
Of being loved with all you got.
Those little touches mean a lot.





Meekly she walks two fingers up his back
She gingerly kisses the stubble on his face
Imprinting the expression of pure desire
looming in his eyes
On her body spirit and mind
A vision she will cherish for all time

no photo
Mon 02/04/13 01:13 PM

If I asked
would you
slowly
remove
one by one
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

You see
the thought of you
dressed
only in midnight’s light
elegantly inviting me
to play with your soul’s hunger
tempts my thoughts

I want to feel
your kisses
I want to feel
your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain
as your breath against my skin
sensually dictates everything I do tonight

So please
tell me
that if I asked
would you
slowly
teasingly
seductively remove
every article of clothing
that prohibits
my eyes from
indulging
in your naked beauty

Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him,
As she slowly takes off her clothing,
Piece by piece.
Hoping he will forever be grateful
of the heartfelt gesture
She is giving him.

Excitement surrounds her
as his loving eyes gaze at
her naked beauty.
He takes her all in,
in one long sweep.

Slowly, he walks towards her.
Taking her in his arms,
He knows this is right.
She has given the only thing
She has,
Her heart, for the night.

Naked and vulnerable
trembling at his touch
she’s longed for this night
for she loves him so much

Sultry eyes belie emotions
long held in each breath
released in gasps as
teeth bite down on lips
ripe for the taking

As she lay bare, body and soul
Exposing to him her weakness
He feels her tender heart in his
And he tastes her delicate lips

She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly

Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words

She feels his masculinity
as it brazenly honors her beauty
it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage
as he takes her softly

Inside her they’re held without escape
his power to overwhelm makes no mistake
as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers
their submission to each other needs no words

Moans escape
And legs entwine.
Forever, it seems,
Entangled with time.

A little touch here
A little touch there,
Engages such feelings
That each would share.

Thoughts are gone
As time transcends,
Magic feelings
Rule this reign.

The want,the need,
That each one has,
Can only be fulfilled
As each one shares.

They give into the powerful surge,
As they unite, their feelings merge.
Until they give it all they have.
And, blasting rockets do emerge.

They soar up to
the heavens above,
As each one
wants and needs to love.

They climb into the clouds it seems,
As each one gives into the dreams.
Of being loved with all you got.
Those little touches mean a lot.

Meekly she walks two fingers up his back
She gingerly kisses the stubble on his face
Imprinting the expression of pure desire
looming in his eyes
On her body spirit and mind
A vision she will cherish for all time

It must be a dream, she thinks...
So long having dreamt of this moment
Sleepless nights spent trying to satisfy her need
Nights that only left her wet and wanting
Tortured sleep among tangled sheets
Where delicate fingers fail to compensate
Now, standing before him, stripped, vulnerable
She arches her back, presses her trembling body against his
Rising up on tip toes, needing to get closer,
She wraps her long slender leg around his muscled thigh
urgently drawing him to her...




tayah12's photo
Mon 02/04/13 06:03 PM
Waves rolling
continuously
The atmosphere surrounding
The only two beings in existence
Morpheus
now a tsunami
This relief
Nothing like that of her own touch
Her fragile finger tip
incapable of sustaining
That primal fire
That's now ablaze

no photo
Tue 02/05/13 02:04 AM

Waves rolling
continuously
The atmosphere surrounding
The only two beings in existence
Morpheus
now a tsunami
This relief
Nothing like that of her own touch
Her fragile finger tip
incapable of sustaining
That primal fire
That's now ablaze


in his hands she is putty
molding her, his consuming study
piece by piece, bit by bit
he’s waited for such a moment as this
as she clings to his muscular frame
beside himself, he whispers her name
within his yearning writhes a beautiful pain
for only she to discover the way to his brain
and once together they drive each other insane
lovers forever, there will be no end to his game

mig25's photo
Wed 02/06/13 10:17 PM


Waves rolling
continuously
The atmosphere surrounding
The only two beings in existence
Morpheus
now a tsunami
This relief
Nothing like that of her own touch
Her fragile finger tip
incapable of sustaining
That primal fire
That's now ablaze


in his hands she is putty
molding her, his consuming study
piece by piece, bit by bit
he’s waited for such a moment as this
as she clings to his muscular frame
beside himself, he whispers her name
within his yearning writhes a beautiful pain
for only she to discover the way to his brain
and once together they drive each other insane
lovers forever, there will be no end to his game



It was as if their souls
had stolen the light from lightning
and sound from thunder
the depth of their love
was that of a natural wonder
their bodies flowed
as the sensual rain’s
of the quiet storm
as the silhouette
of their shadows
became an art form
a gasp of air
inhaled
exhaled
until the release of tension
she screamed quietly
as he continued
his mission
to please her
to love her
to make the night last
until tomorrow’s sun
had come to pass


no photo
Wed 02/06/13 10:22 PM
Cold shower time.....laugh
Excellent writes...smokin

no photo
Thu 02/07/13 02:46 AM



Waves rolling
continuously
The atmosphere surrounding
The only two beings in existence
Morpheus
now a tsunami
This relief
Nothing like that of her own touch
Her fragile finger tip
incapable of sustaining
That primal fire
That's now ablaze


in his hands she is putty
molding her, his consuming study
piece by piece, bit by bit
he’s waited for such a moment as this
as she clings to his muscular frame
beside himself, he whispers her name
within his yearning writhes a beautiful pain
for only she to discover the way to his brain
and once together they drive each other insane
lovers forever, there will be no end to his game



It was as if their souls
had stolen the light from lightning
and sound from thunder
the depth of their love
was that of a natural wonder
their bodies flowed
as the sensual rain’s
of the quiet storm
as the silhouette
of their shadows
became an art form
a gasp of air
inhaled
exhaled
until the release of tension
she screamed quietly
as he continued
his mission
to please her
to love her
to make the night last
until tomorrow’s sun
had come to pass


lovers magic is magnetized
together in silence hypnotized
breathing
screaming
reacting
he holds her in his arms so tight
they’re gently caressing throughout the night
his passion stirs as she looks in his eyes
only in her does his lust compromise
coveting he devours her soul clean
finally he is the king to her queen
life for them is no longer a dream
their very next move remains to be seen

tayah12's photo
Thu 02/07/13 06:43 AM
Checkmate
She bows down
at the feet of her king
submission in the best way
watching him conquer every square inch
of her kingdom

no photo
Thu 02/07/13 06:59 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Thu 02/07/13 07:02 AM

Checkmate
She bows down
at the feet of her king
submission in the best way
watching him conquer every square inch
of her kingdom


the king’s unmistakable victory
now makes him feel strong
and with her by his side
he can do very little wrong
as she submits to his wishes
showing only him her deep love
in return he allows her to keep running amuck
for he understands her wanderlust
and trusts she’ll be true
when it comes to ruling her
and her kingdom
this king knows exactly what to do