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Caught sight of you when i was living the world of fantasy. You brought my fantasy to the real world. Was so scared to fall in love,cos of stories heard from folks that have been stung by love. You melted my anti-love-harden heart with your sensational songs. You made me see reasons why i should fall in love,and taught me how to love when i knew no love. You promised to love me only when you re breathing. But now,all these promises have become a mirage. Brought me so far in this journey of love and left me in the middle of no where. Now you ve shown me how it felt to be stung by love. How could you be so heartless...........
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Pretty write Solace.....sad
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I know this sting much too well myself, Solace... and the journey you took in this write... so many familiar footsteps...
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Thank you for comentin,Leigh!
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Thank you, Athena!
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Aye... follow yer heart.
Other people's stories never do it justice. Much respect for you. Nice write. |
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Edited by
tayah12
on
Tue 02/05/13 06:05 PM
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That love song is what makes us preserver through the sting of love. The feelings of love out weight the fear eventually.then the heart is ready to risk it again.
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You re there,Tay! Thank you!
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Thanks and more respect for you,brother!
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Thanks and more respect for you,brother!
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Hey Solace my brother
How are you and i enjoy reading your writing If love is nothing else it can surely be a Bi^%$b! Hope you are making some friends in here Keep up the writing and never give up hope Always your friend here KiK |
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All good.......Thanks big brorher! Aways be your friend in and out here.
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I know how you feel i have been through it too.....well written.
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