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"Black Ice Heart"
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1 degree above Absolute Zero... Do you see my absent love, my tainted hero....? Absolute Zero? all atomic motion STOPS. Absolute Zero? all molecules frozen like a dead clock. I grew like this Black Ice, cold and trecherous. I grew like this Black Frost, hard and amiss. Absolute Zero, all my blood frozen like a burgundy rock. Absolute Zero, all my heart's motion DROPS. Do you believe my absent love, my absent hero You can't warm me anything above 1 degree past Absolute Zero? ::sigh:: it's perfect |
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Topic:
The Man Of Her Dreams
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i love your stuff...amazing
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amazing write..but then again you're a poet..hehe
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Topic:
"shooting stars...."
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awesome
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Topic:
my secret pain...
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i'm very sorry for your lose. i really don't know anything i could say to consoul you.... very sorry 9 years ago...one day at a time... |
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Topic:
my secret pain...
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thanks, but can i ask why you post so many poems everyday that are just random thoughts and nothing more? If i were you, and you are more than welcome to tell me to go to hell, but why not wait til you have something great to post, every thought you have does not need to be posted. |
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Topic:
my secret pain...
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oh man...and you said you couldnt imagine... what you wrote was amazing kev..couldnt let that be passed up... |
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Topic:
my secret pain...
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Pain forever
In just a few words The sands of my future plans Slip from underneath me I have two children One I see and love every day The other I have never held I saw her once and I named her A fetus only six months old Emma Grace Her tiny hands waved inside me I smiled as the Dr informed me Of the medical prognosis Too lost in her movements To listen I knew she was a girl Just how I knew Austin was a boy I just knew She didn't force me to eat all kinds of sweets Only a girl could be that understanding of vanity We played games Her and I She kicked me In the same spot I had just pushed at her At night I held my belly so tightly I thought I was protecting her Seems I never had that ability Everyday I continue on Smiling and laughing Crying and hurting Yet, I never really continue on How can you live Without closure How can I ever move on When my child Never lived a day |
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muah muah muah
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Edited by
maleah
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Wed 08/12/09 09:11 PM
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beautiful--and i can accept now..sorry
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Topic:
TO DREAM...
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You are not just a pretty face are you. that was quite good. thank you |
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Topic:
To Me
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To Me I am implicit in nature. I do not wish to walk around here stark naked, for scrutiny to evaluate my outer covering. Is it necessary for you to know my scars, measure them, compare them to hers, yours. Is it vital to see the freckles and decide if they are true or age spots Will you be able to determine whether I am able to kiss as well as "so and so"? Can you not see that life has lived, pumped through my veins and death has been enough for now? What would you know that I have not already shown you? Shall I say again, I love you completely? Where are you now, to hear me , to listen to..me..to me? Raine Les 8/12/2009 hit me right in the |
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Topic:
TO DREAM...
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The walls seem to speak to me
As I watch the shadows move with the headlamps of the passing cars Their light shines through the curtained windows Of the opulent jail cell In which I lay incarcerated For the crimes of past choices Headlamps light only the paths of their owners Even if the streets seem a little lighter For their having been there Thoughts run through my tired mind Electric shocks of painful memories Helpless in their consistency Their waves run and keep me at bay So that I may offer my total surrender To the hopelessness they circulate With the aid of my Doctor dosed escapes The sparks dim to allow my tired eyes sleep Within the last moments of wake I beg That a dream will not occupy the newfound blackness And masquerade with its fruitless possibilities Cruel is the night that offers a hope that more exists As more than this There is nothing I see a light within my dark filled mind And I follow the streams of its purity Once under its spell I cannot wake from the passage it illuminates My eyes absorb the rays and emit their own Strong beams like those that guide the cars That still pass by Swerving to splash my naked skin With the pain that lingers in the curb side puddles Of time passed No longer able to afford a vehicle My legs force a much needed rest So I lay upon the hardened streets That my fate has paved before me Within the last moments of wake I pray That a dream shall find its way to my desperate sleep To offer a short but necessary view Of the life I somehow Someday Will make my own |
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Topic:
cupid's broken arrow
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Cupid's arrow seems to be broken Its aim is off on who it is poking He promised that loves truth was ahead Took out his weapon and aimed at my head I closed my eyes and giggled in glee Finally love was to happen to me Directions must have been misread It seems my dog was shot instead! Once she was pierced, her loyalties shifted Now onto the partner that cupid pre-gifted She used to run around with mutts Now with my man that b-i-t-c-h struts My baby's been shot And he cannot see His partner's a dog It's supposed to be me! Today he walked her down my street Her tail in the air She walked with conceit I screamed out the window As the two walked below "She's not what she seems, She's just a missed bow! I waited a lifetime for you to pursue She'll never love you the way that I do" There was no catching my sweetheart's ear Obsessed with my pet since shot by loves spear Though cupid's intentions did come from his heart He forgot to pre-test his component part Love's truth was promised and did lie ahead But my cage is empty and so is my bed Well, bless my boots. We have here a raw and ingenious talent. My dear, I believe you ARE, in fact, an honest to goodness poet. And a good one to boot. Wow thank you |
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Topic:
Oh Holy Mother of God
Edited by
maleah
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Tue 08/11/09 08:55 PM
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if you go to the pharmacy they have this pain killer..not sure of the name but near the ambesol ect...it has a red cross on it...works like a miracle...relieves the pain for hours at a time...has alot of benzocaine in it which will numb it..costs about 6-7 bucks...
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Topic:
Unveiled
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Topic:
More Than a Muse
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I LOVE YOU...
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Topic:
Not Crushing
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<---not crushing
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Topic:
Heart shaped pills...
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Do you whisper sweet "nothings" in her ear too?
Was that sweet talk reserved just for me? "Our bubble" we used to call it I spoke to you as you slept "My Knight in shining armor" Lancelot, capturing me from a world of fire breathing dragons Our first kiss consumed me with truth Knowledge it was to be my last first kiss A feeling so pure couldn't mislead Pills slipped to me daily Cruelty released in milligrams Dosage increased as dependency grew Pills were heart shaped, inscribed with comments "What's wrong with you"? "Tell mommy she's nuts" "What are you stupid"? "I married you to make you a better person" "No one else will want you, you're used property" Immunity to your drug grew Dosage increased, caused overdose The heat of dragons again consumes Within a castle built on hope Do you feed her the same pills? Sugar to lure in the bait An ever increasing after taste of bitterness Perhaps she's the princess you were meant to rescue The conversation hearts offered me etched with only the truth |
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Topic:
A life of sleep...
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very nice writ...little one writ---there you go again...i knew you couldn't spell hahah oh crap!....here i owe you this...."e" it's no secret...we all already knew that... such a dork...haha yup...thats me...a big dork... thanks honey...everyone else at least kept this from me and let me feel like one of the crowd... sorry gorgeous, but someone had to tell ya |
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