Topic: To Me
Sharris's photo
Wed 08/12/09 09:03 AM
To Me

I am implicit in nature.
I do not wish to walk around here
stark naked, for scrutiny
to evaluate my outer covering.
Is it necessary for you to know
my scars, measure them,
compare them to hers, yours.
Is it vital to see the freckles and decide
if they are true or age spots
Will you be able to determine whether
I am able to kiss as well as "so and so"?
Can you not see that life has lived,
pumped through my veins and death
has been enough for now?
What would you know that
I have not already shown you?
Shall I say again, I love you completely?
Where are you now, to hear me ,
to listen to..me..to me?

Raine Les 8/12/2009

no photo
Wed 08/12/09 09:13 AM

To Me

I am implicit in nature.
I do not wish to walk around here
stark naked, for scrutiny
to evaluate my outer covering.
Is it necessary for you to know
my scars, measure them,
compare them to hers, yours.
Is it vital to see the freckles and decide
if they are true or age spots
Will you be able to determine whether
I am able to kiss as well as "so and so"?
Can you not see that life has lived,
pumped through my veins and death
has been enough for now?
What would you know that
I have not already shown you?
Shall I say again, I love you completely?
Where are you now, to hear me ,
to listen to..me..to me?

Raine Les 8/12/2009


hit me right in the:heart:

no photo
Wed 08/12/09 09:43 AM
So is our nature to constantly evaluate...when isn't love just enough? You've said alot with this poem-very nice as always.flowerforyou flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 08/12/09 09:52 AM

To Me

I am implicit in nature.
I do not wish to walk around here
stark naked, for scrutiny
to evaluate my outer covering.
Is it necessary for you to know
my scars, measure them,
compare them to hers, yours.
Is it vital to see the freckles and decide
if they are true or age spots
Will you be able to determine whether
I am able to kiss as well as "so and so"?
Can you not see that life has lived,
pumped through my veins and death
has been enough for now?
What would you know that
I have not already shown you?
Shall I say again, I love you completely?
Where are you now, to hear me ,
to listen to..me..to me?

Raine Les 8/12/2009
flowerforyou