Topic: THE BEST SEX EVER
RawB's photo
Thu 01/22/09 10:04 PM
Oral fixation
I hate everyone
so it's not racism
blind
def
and dumb
I'm a miss communication
also a patriot
only for the other Nations

call me what you will
I'm an illusion
and only you think I'm real

I bend words to my advantage
so you must take your words for granted
I sculpt
and
shape
and relocate
then try my best
to
irritate
tHe EnGliSh majors
WiTH the Very WordS
THat theY MoST faVor
Hate
Me
Love
Me
Love
Me
Hate
Me
You're still sitting there
reading
criticizing
pondering
and debating
how I use these words
more than twice
because it's so infuriating

A literary tragedy
if words had laws
Id be charged for heresy
alphabetical blasphemy
There's no rhythm
or a reason
Before the scholar hierarchy
on account of treason
Id be found guilty
My
sentence structure
is absolutely
filthy
are you still with me
me
lets sing a symphony
mi
doe
re
mi
fa
so
la
ti
doe
Don't mind my alter ego
a singing psycho
LISTEN UP
my last words
I'll write slow
Some..
times..
you..
just..
have..
to..
let..
go..

and stop painting snow
the background
if you didn't know
and read the words
that helped us grow
Shakespeare
Parker
of course the Poe

Lets keep it real
not all of us have
the best of writing skill
the savvy my lads
to write a Jack and Jill

But....

we can still have our pales
and print upon paper our tales
just remember everyone
that
sex sales
sex sales
sex sales








kc0003's photo
Thu 01/22/09 10:28 PM
ok, i like this one...drinker

it's all about the words and the freedom to use and abuse them...the meaning can be subjective at best and that's when they are usually the best.

nice piece...drinker

s1owhand's photo
Thu 01/22/09 10:33 PM
you just friggin
piss
me off

:tongue:

<quote>
i...
like...
that...
<endquote>

bigsmile

no photo
Fri 01/23/09 07:12 AM

Oral fixation
I hate everyone
so it's not racism
blind
def
and dumb
I'm a miss communication
also a patriot
only for the other Nations

call me what you will
I'm an illusion
and only you think I'm real

I bend words to my advantage
so you must take your words for granted
I sculpt
and
shape
and relocate
then try my best
to
irritate
tHe EnGliSh majors
WiTH the Very WordS
THat theY MoST faVor
Hate
Me
Love
Me
Love
Me
Hate
Me
You're still sitting there
reading
criticizing
pondering
and debating
how I use these words
more than twice
because it's so infuriating

A literary tragedy
if words had laws
Id be charged for heresy
alphabetical blasphemy
There's no rhythm
or a reason
Before the scholar hierarchy
on account of treason
Id be found guilty
My
sentence structure
is absolutely
filthy
are you still with me
me
lets sing a symphony
mi
doe
re
mi
fa
so
la
ti
doe
Don't mind my alter ego
a singing psycho
LISTEN UP
my last words
I'll write slow
Some..
times..
you..
just..
have..
to..
let..
go..

and stop painting snow
the background
if you didn't know
and read the words
that helped us grow
Shakespeare
Parker
of course the Poe

Lets keep it real
not all of us have
the best of writing skill
the savvy my lads
to write a Jack and Jill

But....

we can still have our pales
and print upon paper our tales
just remember everyone
that
sex sales
sex sales
sex sales










And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile

Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!

Mystique42's photo
Fri 01/23/09 07:45 AM
totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!:tongue:

RawB's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:30 AM

ok, i like this one...drinker

it's all about the words and the freedom to use and abuse them...the meaning can be subjective at best and that's when they are usually the best.

nice piece...drinker
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your commentwaving
I appreciate itbigsmile

RawB's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:31 AM

you just friggin
piss
me off

:tongue:

<quote>
i...
like...
that...
<endquote>

bigsmile
:laughing: rofl :laughing: I'm glad you like it

RawB's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:33 AM
Edited by RawB on Fri 01/23/09 10:37 AM
MsWizard
[And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile

Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!]

I was hoping you would read this one laugh


Mystique42
[totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ]

slaphead :laughing:

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:34 AM
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn now thats good

As I was reading it (( out loud )))
My voice just kept getting louder and louder,,

Bravoooooooooooooooooooooo flowers

RawB's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:40 AM

Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn now thats good

As I was reading it (( out loud )))
My voice just kept getting louder and louder,,

Bravoooooooooooooooooooooo flowers
blushing Thank you kindly biggrin

no photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:43 AM
yes, I am with you and bowing down to say BRAVO, I agree and I like very muchbigsmile

RawB's photo
Fri 01/23/09 10:49 AM

yes, I am with you and bowing down to say BRAVO, I agree and I like very muchbigsmile
blushing waving aww shucks, You're too kind

no photo
Fri 01/23/09 04:56 PM

MsWizard
[And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile

Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!]

I was hoping you would read this one laugh


Mystique42
[totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ]

slaphead :laughing:


Honey Im reading all your stuff and I dont say that about many people...

RawB's photo
Sun 01/25/09 07:05 AM


MsWizard
[And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile

Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!]

I was hoping you would read this one laugh


Mystique42
[totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ]

slaphead :laughing:


Honey Im reading all your stuff and I dont say that about many people...
blushing awwww you called me honey hehebiggrin I'm flattered, I just hope I'm writing fairly decent stuff and not C-rap haha

no photo
Sun 01/25/09 09:08 AM



MsWizard
[And you did not misspell a single word~! bigsmile

Excellent work~This is such a winning argument, I love it!]

I was hoping you would read this one laugh


Mystique42
[totally orgasmic.... (did I say that?) What a release!tongue ]

slaphead :laughing:


Honey Im reading all your stuff and I dont say that about many people...
blushing awwww you called me honey hehebiggrin I'm flattered, I just hope I'm writing fairly decent stuff and not C-rap haha


Nope you are not *grin* :heart:

no photo
Sun 01/25/09 03:15 PM
Hey RawB, You speak with my mind,wink,lol I like that. And THIS!!!!!..Its always COOL to see another here who has the ability and intelligence to write and speak about real criticisms of other's. Yet still have their own integrity to VOICE IT in TYPE...loldrinker
Young grasshopper, you will be GREAT on this site!
And in your own personal walks through living...:heart:
KEEP being real,and writing from your heart and thoughts.
And I'll keep reading them,lol,lol:banana: