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Just Waiting for Me
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Idle morning dreams.
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![]() Eroticly Well Written. Keep your head up! It's the only way to find her ![]() |
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A POEM FOR MICHAEL JACKSON"
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Very Nice Tribute.
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generic
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great use of the word 'generic'
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Exit…Stage Left
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Great Write!
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how far is Just
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i dream of a day when all is fair in love no war When my woman is my woman and not some skanky ruffled whore i seem to forget what love feels like i remember it was shiney something like leather a made up mind on a made up bed no need for smelling my breathe after what i just said i hate words that rhyme with rhyme it just seems like too much work to put on the cape can i just sit in my dunt-duh-nuns for once? eat on the couch have sex in a theatre when everyone is looking I don't care let them stare this life is all i own |
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that was awesome!
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The Dirty Dozen.
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Thank You
kc vicki slow in the Flesh (renamed from Condomless 2) Dammit this condom Let me show you the real me Feel the real me This feels more like a dream where you are who you are and I am not who I am I need to feel you more than latex you know how much i hate safe sex It makes me aimless where i have a desire to drain less in it i feel weak like when preying for meet on meat i need to eat and release on you in you in you on you feeling you feeling me safe sex is like counting sheep |
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why is that?
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We notice what we focus on we dwell within our dreams but life is like an opera we're the actors in the scenes If you wish to write a romance you must implement the part beseech a woman for a date and be careful not to fart Write out lines of poetry be methodic in your verse never let the woman know your thoughts are so perverse Tell her that she's wonderful and you like the way she smiles be sure to take a shower and pay attention to the styles Share with her your humor but make sure it isn't gross demonstrate your patience and you'll eventually get close Once you've written "friendship" then love can get erotic but scenes must go in baby steps or she'll think that you're psychotic So get your butt up on the stage and audition with your lines and this is no rehearsal so be attired to the nines And when you finally get the part and you're accepted for the role then you'll have to tie the knot and begin to play that fool ![]() Great write Abra ![]() |
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why is that?
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trust
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Weighted
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Had It
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Thank You ArtGurl and 10001
Toxicless Love (inspired by MsTeddy) Patience Greatness of the wait im under goodbye winters hello summers sitting at a little round brown table eating cherry jello poking it with my spoon just to watch it wobble there was a time i wanted one at full throttle gripping her tighter than this bottle surely intoxicated i knew slowing down knowing now what hurt how much pain as such chained to thoughts of love was it too much to want to be rode? sucked? and mentioned? or were these eyes always destined to be crimsoned? |
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Had It
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![]() Someday you will be intoxicated by love... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() that was a very nice thing to say! ![]() ![]() you just gave me an idea for a write ![]() also, thank you lonestar, ainjel, kc and 2km i hope you all have a great weekend! ![]() ![]() |
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Had It
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Obviously I love me Or else I'd be dead as a chained door to a store out of business what is this madness? if you saw me now you'd see me at my saddest flickering flamming retinas inner self degrading sad mess get me those pills on the top shelf of the cabinet i think yes I think I have had enough i feel weak ends trend no love and the other days require less drugs as it works it pulls and i chug a drug ME i fly FREE if only i was hooked on someone like she |
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We...
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Weeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Creative writing
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today I am
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I am happy mad sad get lucky the life inside your doll named chucky round sore feet oval space sh-shuffling blah blah blah ready knife evil hand ch-ch-chucking over water I am snorkeling under water I'm that dork with things entangling strangling founder of such means seems reluctant purely a purpose of a porpoise of a poor fish screams by tangled means surfaced it sings nervous it brings another wise peculiar gleam as top fish of the sea are the ones with the wings I am a dolphin trying so hard to sing |
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return to sender
Edited by
d4tc
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Thu 07/23/09 12:29 PM
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I guess that you people didnt get this one.. I just read it. Great Write! ![]() |
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don't forget the light...
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