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Topic:
Shapes
Edited by
d4tc
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Mon 08/24/09 01:46 PM
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i have the best of both worlds when dunked in milk right now.
Chunky, Peanut Butter Chocolate Chip! 
(Chips Ahoy, lol) |
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Topic:
as real as she can be
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kc, you went from a cool dude to super cool dude. not sure how you would take my response. 
thank you. |
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Topic:
A Beautiful Mess!!!!!!
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LaMom
One good song deserves another. Your poem reminded me of this song I haven't heard it in awhile. 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJuv-Ja4g7w |
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Topic:
as real as she can be
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thanks for the comment kc
i beg to differ 
i would like to view 'all' as beautiful. but I would be lying to myself if I did. replace the word 'all' with 'most' and i would more likely agree. |
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Topic:
as real as she can be
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i want a beautiful woman i don't like beautiful woman they are too critical of the who within them as they are made up they take up too much space in their own worlds i see these girls and i can hardly recognize their face what they show me i cannot embrace I want a real woman who needs no make up a woman who can smile outside as is one that knows the differences as she keeps her head up and dresses in a white shirt opposed to black a girl with meat who likes to flirt like that i want a woman i want a girl not some made up chick from out of this world |
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Awwww I'm not sad, just doing a melancoly write. 
Tried writting dark, but I guess this is as close as I get 
excellent job!
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Topic:
Diary verses Poetry
Edited by
d4tc
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Mon 08/24/09 08:19 AM
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afraid
of those who show me sympathy squinting so hard watering down my diary the ink smudged tears rewritten in poetry clearly to blurry tainted i scurry captive I fear tears the tears of variety some might cheer of such jeers inside of me but the truth of the matter is my heart is my diary abstracted through knowing me on the one hand poetry in my other i clench what you do not need to see my diary so upset it cries with me affecting disecting deeds trailed less intact thee impact half fast poetically less cracks |
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Topic:
i thank god she was the one
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As I held her hand it felt real good laying in her bed talking about life the present from past to future through time I looked in her eyes as she smiled as we laid there I shivering tense jaws talking about current pains crying and holding her hand tighter mentally cringed physically drained i shared my bad luck and visions she encouraged me as well as she nourished me gave me more hope despite being broke from a sour heart i laid there on my side one hand holding up my head she doing the same facing me comforting me I turned on my back to smother the shakyness as she rubbed my back with her free hand I felt gifted by this thanking her for being so patient with me she smiled and the words she didnt say were written on her face reading through emotions face to face feeling less shakey and more calm thanking god she is my mom |
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Topic:
being f'd over
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thank you all!
I really appreciate the suppport and comments. have a great sunday! To LA Mom: instead of bringing back an old post I wanted to say, thank you for the song suggestion. music helps me in many ways and that was a great song
same artist/favorite song
here; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQ2Zrd1E1l0&feature=related |
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Topic:
being f'd over
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if you are going to F me over don't just lie there move on with your badself put! your! back into it turn around walk away |
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Topic:
I Have
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the eagle has landed!
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Topic:
Losing It
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Recently the decency of my being is weakening most of what I am seeing I am too close to believing pale and frail light-headed unreasonings health above PAR claims scars must be D E E Pen ing a nightmare in which where found dead merely sleeping i am breathing under watch pulse pulsar pulsating middle index on my neck to detect the art love heart beating the defeat keeps on feeding what I am eating inside consistently bleeding out of a a white flag waving body aching retreating waiting no changing for escaping the needing a grown man reteething uneasy pains seething a strong will receding all round deceiving this planet were we stand still or move never repleteting happenings leaving lossing proving looting aweful CRIES accrueing shooting cans grabbing squeezing hands cramping BYES |
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Topic:
Mind Games
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an eagle and different kind of wench in bed = POETRY IN MOTION!!! 
Great Write! 
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Topic:
The Art of Subtlety
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I wanted to stand up an cheer after reading this...
Life is what you make of it. Yes it may be. However we all walk around daily and wonder why we cant get along with the people we meet. I am showing you why as we speak. It is because no one is subtle any more and everyone assumes that we mean one thing. The art of expression is meaningless and has no true queen. We all roam day to day wondering, "What, oh what did he or she say?" All of us want answers with no clue yet we all pray. My answer to this, is as simple as three letters. We all need to remember that honesty has no definition. We render its condition. Unfortunately in today's society we all expect so much that we have no sense of the subtle. Because life is out of touch. And that, is creative writing. In whatever sense "Mingle" wanted us to use this forum for unless we were writing poetry. My answer to the question was "spoken" but not written-- hence creative writing. |
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Topic:
Certainly
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Topic:
Free thinker
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Excellent! |
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Topic:
Your Wall
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very nicely written Griffin
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Topic:
Blues and Grays
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definetely... Hot to Death!
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Topic:
An Apology From The Heart
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this may seem silly or wee-off a bit this heartfelt write i think you wrote it if one disagrees by word with no proof it just seems silly like "oops!" someone goofed very well done poeticbway!
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Topic:
Rising and Falling
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excellent write vicki
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