Generic was your carefree stare

The noble morals that we shared

The way you touched me in the night
But just in dreams, out of your sight


Generic was the smell that stayed

Upon a heart that was betrayed

Believing a truth left unknown
A realness that was never shown




Generic was your too tight hold

As if I just fit in a mold

That was determined by the width
Of every woman you laid with


Generic was the way I felt

Each time within my soul you dwelt

Each time you pushed my kisses off
With words as cold as was your scoff





I've dreamed too long of just a dream

That never became what it seemed

Generic is this endless tear
That sheds for what was never here

it's sad when we find in the end, that what we
hoped to create was so far beyond what the other
person is capable of...

nice write

Definitely a nice write..

thanks

Spot on --- very well done!

An impressive and unique expression of experience

Really good job...

great use of the word 'generic'