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Web of Weaves
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I like reading what you come up with
and my word is faith ...Hmmph Faith... When im cold faith wraps me in comfort when im alone and desolate amongst ragged edges of a bitter shore there is faith.. When the emptyness echos my name and life seems to fade as i slip away there is faith.. The moment where the silence feels like endless screams there is faith.. Rattles rattles shakes and shakes your brain lol Your word is Grace but you can do one on faith if you want to cause id like to hear what you say about faith since i had a hard time with it . |
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In general...
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There's no set schedule for exclusivity. It will be different for each person. Distrust will be an issue right away. I agree with what she said... |
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Deja vu Carousel.....
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Tue 09/11/12 12:58 PM
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This was very good I like how you put things its always nice to read what you write |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
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My heart is nothing but a cascade full of broken dreams my life is nothing but a cascade full of shattered hopes my heart was a cascade full of love but alas it was robbed I am nothing but a cascade full of misery i have nothing but a cascade full of sorrow all i had asked for a small cascade of love and care alas all i got was a cascade full of treachery hope its good really had to rattle my brain to write it I really liked that it would of tooken me longer to come up with a cascade one lol I liked that it was cool and neatly well done whats my word ....hope its a easy one lol if not pinches u across the miles lol |
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Topic:
where you lay
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Tue 09/11/12 11:59 AM
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The dead of night wrestled my eyes My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years This is exquisit and i agree with teasing rippple it was past visual you should consider doing a book. |
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Web of Weaves
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Thank you I love the mask your advatar is its a pretty cool one. |
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Web of Weaves
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Let me know when you get on we can continue playing it would be fun to play and i can learn a lot from your writings and improve on my mistakes :) hello unsure when im gonna be but usually am after nine pm as i drink tea and read news at that time But your word for the day is. Cascade ...... |
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Crumpled
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Thank you
I hope you all have a wonderful week,it feels like friday but only a tuesday its gonna be a long week . |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 09:48 PM
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it was a great poem i liked it alot
I liked how you put it all together you havd great talent with words i enjoyed reading it. and it was nice playing the poem game with you thank you. I liked everythign you have wrote and the one about sunset was very nice and shown alot of feelings in it i liked hwo you put about the ghost to . Its after midnight here i have a early morning so i got to get soem Zzzzz but thank you it was fun and nice to read what you wrote one day if your bored and im on ill toss you another word to write about if you dotn mind hope you have a great day full of sunshine and wishes around every corner and laughter to fill every day . |
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Web of Weaves
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Soooo nice...... Thank you ., |
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Web of Weaves
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hmm sunset let me think hehe My life begins after sunset people call me a ghost i dont know why i look around in hope that somebody will see me and set me free my life begins after sunset i dont know why people are afraid of me i am nothing but a figment of their fantasy a broken and corrupted soul i want to make amends but i think its too late i have just one wish that is to see the sunset but how unfortunate i am my life begins after sunset well i dnt knw if its good but its what i could think of and your word is sacrifice :) A cool song you may like when a down mood ever hits you if it does is.... Kutless ...thats what faith can do .... its a fav of mine |
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Web of Weaves
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that was totally nice and real
its nice it comes natural to you your not corrupted by trying to impress i like that and great poem and i saw the emotions and feelings in it and Hmmmph on my word.... twirls my foot on ground thinking..Hmmmph sacrifice... I have sacrificed my better days to be there when yours was not,I sacrificed my youth to give you your goals .I sacrificed my happiness to live in the wounds you would leave me in. I sacrificed and sacrifised and you were never satisfied. ( that one i had to think on ) Uhmmm your word is ...wind and thank you for playing the game . |
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God can be your best friend. If you find yourself total helpless just make God your friend.And see your problem will be solved/ you will get right direction for solving your problem. (Idea from the book "The power of positive thought" by Norman Vincent.) I loved how you put this and im gonna check out that book on my tablet God is so wonderful and never failing . |
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It is better to have a real enemy rather than a false friend ?
I dont want enemys but id rather have that cause u know its the truth what they say to me good or bad. Friendship to me is two people sharing time in life together knowing and growing through life and differnce,respecting another and supporting the other in there dreams even if its soemthign you would never do. its beign there through good and bad with open arms or with a harsh word at times. familys pass on or grow apart and relationships can fail but a true friend will be there all along the way |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 09:01 PM
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Thank you and very true
we cant have good without bad or sweet without bitter . A game my ex. Gf and i used to play is sometimes when bored is each person says a word and the other person has to write soemthing about that word ... If you want to play your word is ...Sunset.... She was good at everything and better with words then me but anyway SO you have to write soemthing short about it anyway you want to . then you have to give me a word to do. |
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 08:54 PM
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I'm 50 divorced, and have dated several women within 5 to 10 years of my age group in the last seven years. After all these gals I have yet to land a relationship. They tell me I'm sexy, smart...blah blah...we even date for several months sometimes, but nothing ever advances. I thought at my age women would be ready to settle down. What's the deal? Am I doing something wrong? No, you're not doing anything wrong, but times have changed!! Women are much more independent now Charles, they have less need for financial security so they can take their time, be more selective, less willing to settle...Also, at your age (and mine) it's not about having children, starting a life together, building security together...It's about "how will this relationship affect my life, will it enhance it"....It's a different ballgame now...Men used to have the advantage, those days are gone...It a more level playing field...Nytragirl is right on the money.... I am glad to see you wrote all that i was gonna hide under a rock and say it but was to shy to say it im glad ur gutsy =) it is true like u said men after ebign miberated had to hold down jobs n raise kids then divorses put them in alot of situations and the money and house and the security and labor used to be the man alot now a days isnt much left for men asd women have to do all those things so id put to help them with there goals or compliments or things that make them feel more lady like and number one to you . but everyone is differnt and you are probably doign things right just there nto ready to commit . shrugs (just thoughts) |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 08:43 PM
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very nicely written :) The darkness increases everyday and the web weaves around her dreams stopping her dreams that give her strength and all the light is engulfed by darkness but just a small hope that tingles and keeps her strength from fading away the dreams that she has light hr path and cover the darkness in her life and the light of life flows into her life she keeps fighting for life the hope is still alive while the web weaves a darkness everyday how is it just wrote what came to mind i hope it is good but i knw its not as good as your poem :) Your poem is perfect truly it came from your heart and with that you can never go wrong, anything that comes from you heart is never wrong no matter any ones opinion but i did truly like it ... I like how you put the light flows and how it all went together. ..I dont write well I know but i enjoy it relaxes me or destresses me .I hope to read more things you write one day. Thank you for being a light on my dreary night hope you have a blessed week and keep shining your a original = ) |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 08:23 PM
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Weaved in a web where the airs so thick its hard to breath.Which ever way i turn i see the memories with no signs of light. Caught on the edge where bones broke once layed and tucked in the corners where there is no where to hide,at night the nighmares dance to wake you up in a cold sweat afraid to move. A weave where once a child would dance and swing from web to web with laughter drew cold and the nightmares of the night always seemd to find her even under her bed. Grown and with hope things change but yet things always stay the same,somedays shes happy and other days she sees only the dark .she pushes and pushes to escape but to her dismay it always stays. love is a whisper in the air that always floats away ,lovers that do not care and freinds who gossip .web of life turn to glass so i may slip and fall and let my blood run a red rivers deep . stars of the night hold yoru wishes upon anothers lovers delight for there wishes and dreams as i haave none to give caught on this web of weaves that engulphs me. Blessings ƸӜƷ Harmony MSB©2012 |
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Kutless ....
Song ..what faith can do Christian and a fav song of mine when im down. |
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Topic:
Crumpled
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Thank you i hope you have a wonderful week.
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