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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 08:23 PM
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Weaved in a web where the airs so thick its hard to breath.Which ever way i turn i see the memories with no signs of light. Caught on the edge where bones broke once layed and tucked in the corners where there is no where to hide,at night the nighmares dance to wake you up in a cold sweat afraid to move. A weave where once a child would dance and swing from web to web with laughter drew cold and the nightmares of the night always seemd to find her even under her bed. Grown and with hope things change but yet things always stay the same,somedays shes happy and other days she sees only the dark .she pushes and pushes to escape but to her dismay it always stays. love is a whisper in the air that always floats away ,lovers that do not care and freinds who gossip .web of life turn to glass so i may slip and fall and let my blood run a red rivers deep . stars of the night hold yoru wishes upon anothers lovers delight for there wishes and dreams as i haave none to give caught on this web of weaves that engulphs me. Blessings ƸӜƷ Harmony MSB©2012 |
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very nicely written :)
The darkness increases everyday and the web weaves around her dreams stopping her dreams that give her strength and all the light is engulfed by darkness but just a small hope that tingles and keeps her strength from fading away the dreams that she has light hr path and cover the darkness in her life and the light of life flows into her life she keeps fighting for life the hope is still alive while the web weaves a darkness everyday how is it just wrote what came to mind i hope it is good but i knw its not as good as your poem :) |
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 08:43 PM
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very nicely written :) The darkness increases everyday and the web weaves around her dreams stopping her dreams that give her strength and all the light is engulfed by darkness but just a small hope that tingles and keeps her strength from fading away the dreams that she has light hr path and cover the darkness in her life and the light of life flows into her life she keeps fighting for life the hope is still alive while the web weaves a darkness everyday how is it just wrote what came to mind i hope it is good but i knw its not as good as your poem :) Your poem is perfect truly it came from your heart and with that you can never go wrong, anything that comes from you heart is never wrong no matter any ones opinion but i did truly like it ... I like how you put the light flows and how it all went together. ..I dont write well I know but i enjoy it relaxes me or destresses me .I hope to read more things you write one day. Thank you for being a light on my dreary night hope you have a blessed week and keep shining your a original = ) |
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Yes i believe so that i wish i could be able to stand still and let the bad phase of life pass away and well you have written a nice poem mine are just a few lines that came to my mind they are nothing compared to your beautiful writing. well life is incomplete without sorrow and happiness wont taste sweet without it but i agree with what you said too :)
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well your poem inspired me to write those few lines and i carved my feelings of heart down here and i hope you write a lot more it inspired me to write
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 09:01 PM
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Thank you and very true
we cant have good without bad or sweet without bitter . A game my ex. Gf and i used to play is sometimes when bored is each person says a word and the other person has to write soemthing about that word ... If you want to play your word is ...Sunset.... She was good at everything and better with words then me but anyway SO you have to write soemthing short about it anyway you want to . then you have to give me a word to do. |
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Soooo nice......
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hmm sunset let me think hehe
My life begins after sunset people call me a ghost i dont know why i look around in hope that somebody will see me and set me free my life begins after sunset i dont know why people are afraid of me i am nothing but a figment of their fantasy a broken and corrupted soul i want to make amends but i think its too late i have just one wish that is to see the sunset but how unfortunate i am my life begins after sunset well i dnt knw if its good but its what i could think of and your word is sacrifice :) |
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that was totally nice and real
its nice it comes natural to you your not corrupted by trying to impress i like that and great poem and i saw the emotions and feelings in it and Hmmmph on my word.... twirls my foot on ground thinking..Hmmmph sacrifice... I have sacrificed my better days to be there when yours was not,I sacrificed my youth to give you your goals .I sacrificed my happiness to live in the wounds you would leave me in. I sacrificed and sacrifised and you were never satisfied. ( that one i had to think on ) Uhmmm your word is ...wind and thank you for playing the game . |
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hmm sunset let me think hehe My life begins after sunset people call me a ghost i dont know why i look around in hope that somebody will see me and set me free my life begins after sunset i dont know why people are afraid of me i am nothing but a figment of their fantasy a broken and corrupted soul i want to make amends but i think its too late i have just one wish that is to see the sunset but how unfortunate i am my life begins after sunset well i dnt knw if its good but its what i could think of and your word is sacrifice :) A cool song you may like when a down mood ever hits you if it does is.... Kutless ...thats what faith can do .... its a fav of mine |
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Soooo nice...... Thank you ., |
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so how was the poem and its your turn ro write now sorry didnt understand what you said if the poem was nice or not
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 09/10/12 09:48 PM
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it was a great poem i liked it alot
I liked how you put it all together you havd great talent with words i enjoyed reading it. and it was nice playing the poem game with you thank you. I liked everythign you have wrote and the one about sunset was very nice and shown alot of feelings in it i liked hwo you put about the ghost to . Its after midnight here i have a early morning so i got to get soem Zzzzz but thank you it was fun and nice to read what you wrote one day if your bored and im on ill toss you another word to write about if you dotn mind hope you have a great day full of sunshine and wishes around every corner and laughter to fill every day . |
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i just read your poem its so true and real and good night sweet dreams hope to read ur beautiful poems again soon take care
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Let me know when you get on we can continue playing it would be fun to play and i can learn a lot from your writings and improve on my mistakes :)
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Let me know when you get on we can continue playing it would be fun to play and i can learn a lot from your writings and improve on my mistakes :) hello unsure when im gonna be but usually am after nine pm as i drink tea and read news at that time But your word for the day is. Cascade ...... |
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Thank you
I love the mask your advatar is 
its a pretty cool one. |
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hmm cascade an interesting word a nice challenge will have to think and rattle my brain now hehe
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My heart is nothing but a cascade
full of broken dreams my life is nothing but a cascade full of shattered hopes my heart was a cascade full of love but alas it was robbed I am nothing but a cascade full of misery i have nothing but a cascade full of sorrow all i had asked for a small cascade of love and care alas all i got was a cascade full of treachery hope its good really had to rattle my brain to write it |
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