thank you very much for the compliment DaySinner!!!

Cool poem Athena Rose!!! You are sooo talented!!!

Thank you kc0003!!!

Mig25 thank you for the kind words and support! Its much appreciateted!!!

AndyBe Good , thank you for reading and for your input!!!

Tazzops... ♥ Thank You!!!

Leigh, thank you so much.. i have been wanting to try my hand at writing and like I have said before, I have  been inspired by you all on mingle as well as some poet friends I have. And that short poem just poured out of my mind without really even thinking about it... I was thinking about universal consiousness and my dreams...lol Thank you for the link. I will be sure to check it out! Talking about great things Japanese.... there is a really awesome Japanese movie that is called The House of Flying Daggers.. if you get a chance, watch it!! Its a brilliant movie!!! Thanks again for the encouragement!

Day Sinner, thank you very much.. I am new to the whole creative writing thing but you all give me great inspiration!!! I appreciate that you took the time to read my work and thank you for the positive response!!!

Great poem!!! Very in depth and intriguing as usual!!! Awesome work!!!

Italian Man, Thank You! Don't be jealous... just be proud cuz that is my first poem in a long time!!! Besides the short one I posted yesterday! Lol.. i've been meaning to express myself through writing to see if I have any talent.. lol Now its your turn! ;)

Athena Rose, Thank You!!! I am so happy you liked it!!! You really inspired me with your wonderful talent, to be quiet, pay attention, and search within my soul to find the right words.. I am very grateful to you. And thank you for sharing and inspiring ppl with your talents! Also a thank you to my other talented poet friend Adan B... who told me a few years back that I looked jaded.! Lol, Adan,.. Im not Jaded.. now just inspired by your work...lol.. I hope he is proud of me when he reads my poem..lol

~JADED~

He said I looked Jaded......... should I have fears? A simple comment stuck in my head for years.
He said I looked Jaded?
And I wonder why???...
Mabye because your words are all really just lies.
The lies that you say are all such disgraces.
Plain as the nose on your shallow *** faces.
Jaded you say???
How observant of you!....
All because of the heartache you put me through...
Jaded??? I thought??
You're probably right...because of this bullsh*t I can't sleep at night.

Jaded am I???
Yes, i'll admit im a dummy, for letting you steal all my hard earned money....
The illusions of your love are just sweeter than honey....
And why can't I resist your masculine ways???
Devalue, demean me, and throw me away....

HEART JADED, SOUL TWISTED, EYES FULL OF TEARS,
A flicker of hope in my sad heart appears....

Jaded???
Not me...I no longer feel blue ,
I found someone else who is kind, loyal and true...

And now the only one in this ***** Jaded is YOU.....

~JADED~BY:Miranda Lopez ~

Hmmm,Interesting... ;)

thanks for the encouragement!

Cool write!

Athena Rose, thank you.. that is much appreciated coming from you.. I have been wanting to write also, especially after being inspired by your talents as well as some others here on the sight. This one I did not plan to write... my mind manifestes at times, so I wrote it down. Lol. I am eager to share my first poem that ive written in a very long time with you. I will post it very soon. But remember, I am a beginner, so go easy on me! Jk.. lol! Thanks again! ♡

love this poem

Somewhere deep within the universal galaxies of consiousnes

Lies sight, clearer than reality

The beauty is just as breathtaking as the terror


~mislopez~

Cool.. always so intriguing!!!! ;)