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Ecstasy
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Danielson...I loved it simplly loved it....awesome write sweetie pie ![]() ![]() As always your thoughts and comments are welcome.. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Take Me Away
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Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it... ![]() ![]() Thank you sas, at least one reply.. ![]() |
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BEWARE,,,,,PREDATORS
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awww, Terry, I feel for your friend.. and offer her my friendship.. let her know she has people here that care..
A nice way to honor her by writing this my friend.. ![]() ![]() |
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~A Justified Journey~
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A beautiful poem of courage and bravery.. and a heart for the meek.. very well written Cy.. ![]() Thx!bro.I feel deeply honored 2 hear them words from U.For U are another 1 of the great writers within our beautiful poetic home place.I've read much of your work btw & I enjoy your writing tremendously.U have such brilliant prose & U express yourself beautifully.Only a man w/a fine heart & soul possesses the ability 2 write & express oneself in this manner.We are all extremely grateful 4 your talent & ur generosity to wards us all.Godspeed!Cy ![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I didn't know I had that kind of an impact.. Thank you for making me aware of it.. I just speak from what's in my heart, and you my friend are a great writer as well.. Poetry is something I love to read and write, believe it or not, I didn't even know I had this talent until my ex and I split up..which will be a year on the 11th of this month, I went through the most horrible pain because of that, along with watching my mother die two months prior to the break up.. I needed a way to release the pain, and God gave me this gift as a way of doing it.. We poets I believe are a special breed, we write poems that inspire people, help them to smile, bring a joyful tear, or a sad one depending on the poem... we take then away on journeys through the mind.. it's our gift to them.. Thank you Cy ![]() ![]() |
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Call Upon Me
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Nice one Robert.. yes The Lord is always there when we need him, even when we are at our lowest point in life and it seems like he isn't, he is.. Thank you for this poem Robert..
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Yes, I
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very nice Sharris.. a little sad..but nice.. you ok girl..
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STOP
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You are right "T" WHen you love someone you should be able to open enough to communicate your likes and dislikes. When it comes to movies, dinner or yes even making love. SOmeone who truly loves you from the inside out will WANT to please you and even ask what you desire and that goes both ways. You figure you have the rest of your lives together to get it right -ey? So practice makes perfect.!!! Sex is mechanical and selfish it gratifies but only for a few moments- making love is a bond that should only bring you closer together not with just body parts but with mind, spirit and soul. Terry, I don't believe I could have said anything better than what she just did... cheers my friend.. ![]() ![]() |
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~A Justified Journey~
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A beautiful poem of courage and bravery.. and a heart for the meek.. very well written Cy..
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very eloquently written as always MsWizard...
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Ecstasy
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Daniel, be careful,,,,,,,THESE ladies MIGHT start seeing you with your clothes off ![]() Just kiddin ya Bro. Nice write...... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Ecstasy
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"Time seems to stop" Isn't that the truth! ![]() ![]() ![]() AngelLight.. glad to see you comment on one of my poems... ![]() ![]() |
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Ecstasy
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"Kissing and caressing in total ecstasy nothing else exsists except for you and me" Oh Daniel....lovely! ![]() ![]() ![]() MsWizard, glad you enjoyed it.. ![]() ![]() |
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Ecstasy
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Thank you Sexy
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Ecstasy
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Thank you Red..
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Ecstasy
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Physical attraction
you have it all there you look my way we both begin to stare Like reading each others thoughts undressing each other in both our minds erotic thoughts of ecstasy as we bigin to walk closer at the very same time Smiling with desire our eyes begin to glow sensual erotic passion begins to over flow We know what we both want in our minds it's very clear emotions running wildly as the time is drawing near I begin to kiss your lips slowly working my way down heavy breathing sensual moaning is the only sound Off with the clothes the moment begins to heat skin touching skin as our bodies meet Hearts pounding wildly as the love making begins neither of us wanting this moment to ever end Kissing and caressing in total ecstasy nothing else exsists except for you and me Time seems to stop reality no longer exsists except the sharing os ourselves in pure blissfulness By Daniel 05/03/08 |
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Meditate
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Very well said.. meditation is a way of calming the spirit..
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Take Me Away
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Take me away
come into me let me show you how love can be in perfect harmony Take my hand give me a chance let me show you the passion of true romance Let't come together let me kiss your lips let me softly touch you with my finger tips Let me take you places that you've never been let me show you my heart and what lay within Trust in me be more than a friend I will always be by your side untill the very end Take another look are you sure it's not me can you say i'm not the one with all certainty Lean on me anytime you need it's ok my darling I have plenty of strength Just come to me anytime you want to talk because I will always stand with you and never let you fall By Daniel 5/03/08 |
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Broken mirror
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Very well put, all of us have suffered tremendous pain in our lives i'm sure...
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“A Real Man”
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A very nice tribute to us men, thank you kristi, to bad a lot of us real men get overlooked though.. nice one..
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This feeling
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A tightness in my chest and this yearning in my heart what your doing to me is tearing me apart I wish that I could show you tell you what you mean to me but no matter what I say or do the truth,you'll never see So what choices can I make you just don't understand I was ment to be your woman, but you'll never be my man. Awwww, sweetie.. have you told him how you feel? He might feel the same way.. Daniel<----- kindly lends his shoulder if you need it.. ![]() |
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