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2Btrue2One
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There came a day
my Queen sent for me when I recieved her call I came with all Godspeed Standing in her presence I then kneeled on one knee I asked my Queen how may I serve thee She said rise Sir Daniel oh how I love thee you are my last Knight and you mean everything to me I have something to ask of you this is not an order, but a request I ask you to go on a dangerous quest I said, my Queen there is no danger to great just speak the word and I will make hast She said, oh Daniel I hate to ask this of you because all the other Knight are gone I don't want to lose you too I said, My Queen here I stand you know that whatever you wish will be my command With love, honor and bravery I serve you my Queen you know that I am here to fulfill your every need With her head hung low and tears in her eyes from her throne slowly she began to rise She walked over to me and softly touched my lips teacing them so gently with her finger tips She then softly spoke with a quivering voice I didn't want to ask you this Daniel but I have no other choice There is a talisman a golden flower it's said to possess magical powers With this flower I could heal this land and a never ending peace would always stand By Daniel 05/08/08 Part One To be continued The Quest Part Two For a few moments silence filled the air upon my Queens face was a blank stare I then asked, Tell me my Queen where is this flower the one you say possesses this magical power And why my Queen do you fear that I may never return to you here She said, Oh my dear Daniel this story I will tell you because I know that in your heart to me you are true You brothers in arms all of the other Knights they all took this journey and each of them died That's why it grieves my heart to ask you this because if anything happened to you you would be sorely missed The story goes as it was told to me this magical flower was created from the beginning of eternity It's a puzzle shrouded in mystery very few have ever lived long enough to tell of it's history Once you get past our enemies and make it to this place there is a door you will see that has a lions face Touch the nose of the lion and turn it to the right wait a few moments and you will be inside Once you get inside you will come to a rift a place where space and time doesn't exist There will be a great creature that guards this flower one that has lived through the ages one of immense power You must head north Daniel you will travel through enemy land that's why this is so dangerous Daniel I hope you understand But the needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few and now I fear I must ask this of you Remember this only a heart that's pure can grasp it in their hand for if there is any evil in you you will die where you stand But I know you daniel your heart is full of love you are one of Gods gifts sent from heaven above You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive By Daniel 05/09/08 To be continued.. The Quest Part Three Slowly pacing the floor in her spirit I could see the love and compassion My Queen had for me I said, My Queen you are in my heart you see and there is nothing to great you could ever ask of me I will depart on the morrow I will ride like the wind I will bring you this flower so this land you can mend Hold your head up Don't cry my Queen as sure as my name is Daniel I will return to thee After a long night and some much needed rest I left the Stronghold and set out on my quest A few days had passed since I began this journey off in the distance there were Knights approaching me I then stopped and dismounted my horse I reached to my side and unsheathed my sword I called out to them are you friend or foe I will do what I have to to get to where I must go Slowly they approached they dismounted their horses they reached to their side and unsheathed their swords One of them spoke he said, I recognize your crest I know of the Queen you serve that's in the southwest You must renounce your allegiance and come to our side if you do not do this on this day you will die I then said, There is nothing you can say or anything you can do because for my Queen my heart will always be true He then said, Prepair yourself your Queens last Knight because today you are going to die The enemy Knights they numbered ten I raised my sword and said let the battle begin By Daniel 05/12/08 To be continued |
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The Quest Part One And Two
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(((((Pam))))) (((((Noden)))))
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The Quest Part One And Two
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Great read from a great write. With a poem like that, I would have to agree with the Queen and say you have the best chance to survive. "You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive" Pen > Sword Thanks d4tc, glad you liked it, I should have part three done sometime today or this evening.. it make me happy that people appreciate my work.. And Terry, yes you brought a grin to my face and a chuckle.. Thank you my friend.. |
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For my mother
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You are so very welcome..
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For my mother
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Here it is, Mother's day , there is no way I'll ever hear you say-"I love you, my daughter!" Your life on Earth was short I miss your embrace I felt I couldn't face even a day without you! I somehow made it through these days and years with just your memories! I love you, and miss you mom!! November 5-1949-June 17-2004 Red here's to all of us that have to go through the rest of out lives without our Mothers.. I know how it feels to go through life without being able to hug her and hear say I love you one more time.. but we keep our Mothers in our hearts, and remember all that they taught us, and did for us when they were here.. Much love to all of us who have suffered this kind of loss.. |
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Mom
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A very touching tribute to your Mother.. i know she is looking down on you from heaven above.. My mother is with the Lord also.. but remember as long as we live, a paet of them survives through us.. ty 2be and sorry for your loss as well and i truely beleive that..i also know i will see her again one day when i go to live with the lord You are so very welcome.. I can honestly say that I would not be the man I am today if it wasn't for my Mother being so loving and kind, she taught me to always be kind and gentle, and to always give respect, until there is a reason not to.. |
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without you
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My life without you,.. is feelin so blue,.. without your smiling face,.. my mind can`t erase,. everyday is the same,. like left standing out in the rain,.. Please do not live your life feeling blue. Live your life a-new With each new day, feel it in with your smiling way. Always remember me as who I was then. Take life's pains on the chin. This way you will always win. Great poem, and Happy Mother's Day! Terry that was a very nice response to the lady, and it seems she needed to hear special words like that.. to my gallent friend.. here's to you Terry.. cheers... |
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Mom
Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Sun 05/11/08 07:35 AM
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A very touching tribute to your Mother.. i know she is looking down on you from heaven above.. My mother is with the Lord also.. but remember as long as we live, a part of them survives through us..
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The Lover Tango
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are u writing too your own self Naw, his Lady is a member here.. I know them both quite well.. Nice poem Eric.. |
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without you
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awww sweetie.. do you need a shoulder...
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The Quest Part One And Two
Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Sun 05/11/08 07:17 AM
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Thanks Cy,.. And robert I will keep that in mind, you have given me an idea for when I write the next part.. I believe I will write you in the story.. thanks for the inspiration
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It was you,,,,Mother
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Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom.. Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here.. Daniel, WORDS cannot say how much I feel your loss. Knowing she is still with you in your heart and watching you from above is a great comfort. But to not be able to hug each other and to just hear her voice on the phone has to be very saddening...im trully sorry. KNOW that she KNOWS your love is feels all of your heart. Thank you Terry, I miss her immensely.. she has been gone now for one year three months, and thirtysix days.. I still talk to her all the time, and I know she hears me... the hardest thing was watching her slip away after she was taken off of life support.. I pray that no one else ever has to go through that kind of pain... |
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Personally, I don't want friends with benefits.. and I have never been the kind of man that just has sex for the pleasure of it.. Making Love is a sacred thing share by two people that have deep feelings for one another, and should be held in the highest reguard.. JMO..
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It was you,,,,Mother
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Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom..
Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here.. |
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In Loving Tribute to Kim
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Just letting you know Kim, i'm thinking of you, and keeping you in my prayers..
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Very nice Gaia.. and touching..
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Happy Birthday Noden
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I just wanted to wish you the most wonderful birthday you have ever had.. and may each one that follows be better than the ones in the past.. much love to you Noden..
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The Quest
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Hey Terry, just posted part two.. I'm doing well, how are you my friend?
and thanks to you d4tc.. |
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The Quest Part One And Two
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There came a day
my Queen sent for me when I recieved her call I came with all Godspeed Standing in her presence I then kneeled on one knee I asked my Queen how may I serve thee She said rise Sir Daniel oh how I love thee you are my last Knight and you mean everything to me I have something to ask of you this is not an order, but a request I ask you to go on a dangerous quest I said, my Queen there is no danger to great just speak the word and I will make hast She said, oh Daniel I hate to ask this of you because all the other Knight are gone I don't want to lose you too I said, My Queen here I stand you know that whatever you wish will be my command With love, honor and bravery I serve you my Queen you know that I am here to fulfill your every need With her head hung low and tears in her eyes from her throne slowly she began to rise She walked over to me and softly touched my lips teacing them so gently with her finger tips She then softly spoke with a quivering voice I didn't want to ask you this Daniel but I have no other choice There is a talisman a golden flower it's said to possess magical powers With this flower I could heal this land and a never ending peace would always stand By Daniel 05/08/08 Part One To be continued The Quest Part Two For a few moments silence filled the air upon my Queens face was a blank stare I then asked, Tell me my Queen where is this flower the one you say possesses this magical power And why my Queen do you fear that I may never return to you here She said, Oh my dear Daniel this story I will tell you because I know that in your heart to me you are true You brothers in arms all of the other Knights they all took this journey and each of them died That's why it grieves my heart to ask you this because if anything happened to you you would be sorely missed The story goes as it was told to me this magical flower was created from the beginning of eternity It's a puzzle shrouded in mystery very few have ever lived long enough to tell of it's history Once you get past our enemies and make it to this place there is a door you will see that has a lions face Touch the nose of the lion and turn it to the right wait a few moments and you will be inside Once you get inside you will come to a rift a place where space and time doesn't exist There will be a great creature that guards this flower one that has lived through the ages one of immense power You must head north Daniel you will travel through enemy land that's why this is so dangerous Daniel I hope you understand But the needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few and now I fear I must ask this of you Remember this only a heart that's pure can grasp it in their hand for if there is any evil in you you will die where you stand But I know you daniel your heart is full of love you are one of Gods gifts sent from heaven above You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive By Daniel 05/09/08 To be continued.. |
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The Quest
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Thank you everyone for your replies..
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