Topic: Take Me Away
2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:50 AM
Take me away
come into me
let me show you how love
can be in perfect harmony

Take my hand
give me a chance
let me show you the passion
of true romance

Let't come together
let me kiss your lips
let me softly touch you
with my finger tips

Let me take you places
that you've never been
let me show you my heart
and what lay within

Trust in me
be more than a friend
I will always be by your side
untill the very end

Take another look
are you sure it's not me
can you say i'm not the one
with all certainty

Lean on me
anytime you need
it's ok my darling
I have plenty of strength

Just come to me
anytime you want to talk
because I will always stand with you
and never let you fall

By Daniel
5/03/08

sasfire75's photo
Sat 05/03/08 12:13 PM
Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it...:wink: Of course I love all the poems you write...heheheblushing

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:18 PM

Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it...:wink: Of course I love all the poems you write...heheheblushing


Thank you sas, at least one reply..flowerforyou

Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:19 PM
Beautiful, written so eloquently

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:22 PM

Beautiful, written so eloquently


Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire..flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:24 PM


Beautiful, written so eloquently


Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire..flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Yes it is

I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent
I am Gaia

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:30 PM



Beautiful, written so eloquently


Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire..flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Yes it is

I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent
I am Gaia


If I remember correctly, Gaia is in control of all the elements, and influences human behaivior, love, passion, romance.. correct me if i'm wrong..

Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:32 PM




Beautiful, written so eloquently


Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire..flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Yes it is

I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent
I am Gaia


If I remember correctly, Gaia is in control of all the elements, and influences human behaivior, love, passion, romance.. correct me if i'm wrong..



You are correct

no photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:38 PM
drinker :smile: drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:33 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:01 PM
flowerforyou drinker

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 05/04/08 03:08 AM
Beautiful write, reinforces contentment and assurance. Nicely done flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 03:17 AM

Beautiful write, reinforces contentment and assurance. Nicely done flowerforyou


Thank you Bonny, always nice to recieve comments from you on my poems.. glad you liked it..flowerforyou flowerforyou

And thanks to everyone else that replied
AngelLightflowerforyou

MsTeddyflowerforyou

Cypoetdrinker

All of you have my utmost respect


laughsandgiggles's photo
Sun 05/04/08 08:08 AM
Daniel I really enjoyed this one. nice- thank youflowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 08:32 AM

Daniel I really enjoyed this one. nice- thank youflowerforyou


You are welcome, and thank youflowerforyou flowerforyou

Redsoxfan1's photo
Sun 05/04/08 08:34 AM
great write!!flowerforyou I like this one!!:heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 08:36 AM

great write!!flowerforyou I like this one!!:heart:


Thank you Red..flowerforyou flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 05/05/08 10:08 AM
Will you take me away Daniel?flowerforyou :heart: