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Take me away
come into me let me show you how love can be in perfect harmony Take my hand give me a chance let me show you the passion of true romance Let't come together let me kiss your lips let me softly touch you with my finger tips Let me take you places that you've never been let me show you my heart and what lay within Trust in me be more than a friend I will always be by your side untill the very end Take another look are you sure it's not me can you say i'm not the one with all certainty Lean on me anytime you need it's ok my darling I have plenty of strength Just come to me anytime you want to talk because I will always stand with you and never let you fall By Daniel 5/03/08 |
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Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it... Of course I love all the poems you write...hehehe
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Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it... Of course I love all the poems you write...hehehe Thank you sas, at least one reply.. |
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Beautiful, written so eloquently
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. |
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. Yes it is I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent I am Gaia |
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. Yes it is I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent I am Gaia If I remember correctly, Gaia is in control of all the elements, and influences human behaivior, love, passion, romance.. correct me if i'm wrong.. |
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. Yes it is I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent I am Gaia If I remember correctly, Gaia is in control of all the elements, and influences human behaivior, love, passion, romance.. correct me if i'm wrong.. You are correct |
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Beautiful write, reinforces contentment and assurance. Nicely done
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Beautiful write, reinforces contentment and assurance. Nicely done Thank you Bonny, always nice to recieve comments from you on my poems.. glad you liked it.. And thanks to everyone else that replied AngelLight MsTeddy Cypoet All of you have my utmost respect |
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Daniel I really enjoyed this one. nice- thank you
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Daniel I really enjoyed this one. nice- thank you You are welcome, and thank you |
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great write!! I like this one!!
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great write!! I like this one!! Thank you Red.. |
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Will you take me away Daniel?
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