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FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 10:51 AM
A tightness in my chest and this yearning in my heart what your doing to me is tearing me apart I wish that I could show you tell you what you mean to me but no matter what I say or do the truth,you'll never see So what choices can I make you just don't understand I was ment to be your woman, but you'll never be my man.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/28/08 10:52 AM
AWWWWWWWW Honey! When the right man is there in the right time it will be and you won't have to make him understand he will just know as you do.

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 10:54 AM
(((lurchs)))

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Mon 04/28/08 11:08 AM
very sad but a very good rite

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 11:09 AM
thanx joe

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/28/08 11:10 AM


FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 11:10 AM
(((LA))) ty

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 04/28/08 11:32 AM


FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 11:33 AM
Angel thank you

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 04/28/08 11:39 AM
Sad yet beautiful. I wish you love!

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Mon 04/28/08 11:57 AM
Never Alone Alone is what you may think you are Any signs of hope may seem far But if you look within your heart You’ll see an unconditional love waiting to start. When faced with things that cause fear And the comfort you need doesn’t seem to be near Worry covers you heart and mind The peace that’s needed becomes hard to find. You wonder why certain things have to be The reasoning behind the matters you’re unable to see Your thoughts are blown all over the place And you’re left with a blank look upon your face. There are battles you must go through And wounds that you must indure. Weather you’re young or old God will heal and He longs to fill your heart. Alls you have to do is follow His lead He will take care of the rest… God will prvoide all that you want and desrve..

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 12:03 PM
Never Alone Alone is what you may think you are Any signs of hope may seem far But if you look within your heart You’ll see an unconditional love waiting to start. When faced with things that cause fear And the comfort you need doesn’t seem to be near Worry covers you heart and mind The peace that’s needed becomes hard to find. You wonder why certain things have to be The reasoning behind the matters you’re unable to see Your thoughts are blown all over the place And you’re left with a blank look upon your face. There are battles you must go through And wounds that you must indure. Weather you’re young or old God will heal and He longs to fill your heart. Alls you have to do is follow His lead He will take care of the rest… God will prvoide all that you want and desrve.. Beautiful, ty

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/28/08 01:17 PM
That was beautiful yet sad...but you never know what is in store in the future.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 04/28/08 01:35 PM
Very nice, Valerie! I love this one! good job!

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Mon 04/28/08 02:54 PM


FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 03:02 PM
thank you rush

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Mon 04/28/08 03:47 PM
You don't need to thank me because you are Wonderful.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 05/02/08 04:13 AM
A tightness in my chest and this yearning in my heart what your doing to me is tearing me apart I wish that I could show you tell you what you mean to me but no matter what I say or do the truth,you'll never see So what choices can I make you just don't understand I was ment to be your woman, but you'll never be my man. Awwww, sweetie.. have you told him how you feel? He might feel the same way.. Daniel<----- kindly lends his shoulder if you need it..

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 05/02/08 06:55 AM


sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Tue 05/06/08 05:30 PM
You can lead a heart to love, but You can't make it fall... Words from a county song I heard today... So true!!! (I forget the artist and title)