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Topic: “A Real Man”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 04/30/08 09:36 AM
“A Real Man” Only a real man will treat you right. And will keep the flame going all night. A real man will not have to ask. And Making Love will never be a task. He will know from the touch of her skin. What turns her on within. His passion for her will run deep. And beside her he will sleep. A real man will never leave you feeling blue. And he will always be true. He will hold your face in a loving embrace. As he takes time to kiss every inch of your face. He will be able to ignite the flame. And in passion he will call out your name. He will leave you wanting more. Each time for you will never know what is in store. A real man will trace your body with his finger tips. Making circles till he reaches your hips. Within he will make your fires burn. And he will take you beyond the realm of no return. This is what a real man will do. He will be there only just for you. K.L.M 4/30/08 Well figured I did one on a Real Woman we should have one on a Real Man too.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Wed 04/30/08 09:37 AM
Very nice! Thank you for sharing!!

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Wed 04/30/08 09:40 AM


CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Wed 04/30/08 09:42 AM
Bearifically beautiful.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 04/30/08 09:45 AM
((((TX)))) Love it Dolly!! Now everyone read it backwards it is just as good!!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Wed 04/30/08 09:48 AM
Simply lovely TxsGal... To bad I can't be that for you... So popular, the line to talk to you runs past the snack bar... Cause you're a real woman... No Joke... Pleasure to see, and read you as always... SMILE! And I agree with Sister... it reads exceptionally well, both back and forth... Lol.. Of course, I don't see why it wouldn't... You yourself, look good, from both the back, and front, up and down... hee hee....

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 04/30/08 09:48 AM
nice

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 04/30/08 09:49 AM
((((TX)))) Love it Dolly!! Now everyone read it backwards it is just as good!! Thank you all for reading glad you enjoyed it as well.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 04/30/08 09:50 AM
Simply lovely TxsGal... To bad I can't be that for you... So popular, the line to talk to you runs past the snack bar... Cause you're a real woman... No Joke... Pleasure to see, and read you as always... SMILE! And I agree with Sister... it reads exceptionally well, both back and forth... Lol.. Of course, I don't see why it wouldn't... You yourself, look good, from both the back, and front, up and down... hee hee.... You flirt you!! Good to see you here Ben! You've been missed!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 04/30/08 09:57 AM
Simply lovely TxsGal... To bad I can't be that for you... So popular, the line to talk to you runs past the snack bar... Cause you're a real woman... No Joke... Pleasure to see, and read you as always... SMILE! And I agree with Sister... it reads exceptionally well, both back and forth... Lol.. Of course, I don't see why it wouldn't... You yourself, look good, from both the back, and front, up and down... hee hee.... Awwww what a sweetheart you are one day you will find your Real Woman and walk hand n hand down a journey of love.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Wed 04/30/08 10:20 AM
Yeah, Sister... I can't HELP but flirt, with the ones' who have that intelligence... that demeanor... wit, ease, and flow of life within their fingers... Even if they are taken! Txs, I might find that lady someday... Most of the time, I'm afraid it's just going to be me, in drag.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 04/30/08 10:29 AM
loved it

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 04/30/08 10:38 AM
Yeah, Sister... I can't HELP but flirt, with the ones' who have that intelligence... that demeanor... wit, ease, and flow of life within their fingers... Even if they are taken! Txs, I might find that lady someday... Most of the time, I'm afraid it's just going to be me, in drag. Well hell we must learn to love ourselves first anyway. Thanks Pam

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 04/30/08 10:39 AM
Yeah, Sister... I can't HELP but flirt, with the ones' who have that intelligence... that demeanor... wit, ease, and flow of life within their fingers... Even if they are taken! Txs, I might find that lady someday... Most of the time, I'm afraid it's just going to be me, in drag. Well hell we must learn to love ourselves first anyway. Thanks Pam AMEN to that sister!!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Wed 04/30/08 10:42 AM
Lmao... I don't know about that... Look what happened to PeeWee...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 04/30/08 10:43 AM
Lmao... I don't know about that... Look what happened to PeeWee... LMAO!! You're BAD!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/30/08 11:05 AM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 04/30/08 11:06 AM Edited by d4tc on Wed 04/30/08 11:09 AM
Very, Very, Good! EDIT: I have read this poem 4 times. Man, I wish I would have wrote this...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 04/30/08 11:08 AM
Lmao... I don't know about that... Look what happened to PeeWee... Ohhh yur just not right there now well just don't go to that extreme of loving yourself Vickie thanks for reading girlfriend. MsTeddy d4tc thank you very much for your kind words

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Wed 04/30/08 11:14 AM
That is quite the compliment, from D4TC... Not to mention everyone else... I think that this one appears to be going over as well as your other one about women... (Lol, which, I didn't/haven't gotten to read yet) If this first one is any indication, then I'm missing out! (and yeah, I'm not totally right in the head) Lol... but, I promise to stay away from the PlayHouse... or scream any magic words!