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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sat 05/03/08 02:32 AM
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Broken mirror
A round trip ticket across eternity emotional baggage held within. Images of the mind scattered upon paisley dreams. Past memories hijack reality, while echoing silent regrets. A puzzle of broken promises cast a reflection from within the heart. Life becomes a broken mirror sunset memories on the shores of your heart. A destruction of virtue a marry go round of failed conclusions of consequence. Tears of a clown the show of life must go on while building a wall of tears. Days turn into years, while you loose yourself from within a self appointed obsession. Emancipation of the heart falls on death ears of the soul in solitude of itself. Life becomes a broken mirror sunset memories on the shores of your heart. You may never be happy with anyone else if your not happy with yourself. The emotional scars you fail to see will appear openly upon the soul. Encrypted messages sail across a sea of glass the window too the soul. Distant shores of a broken mirror reflect illusions of the past still held within your heart. Life answers all your questions with only silence, and a broken heart. |
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goood write
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The emotional scars you fail to see will appear openly upon the soul.
those words are so true.......i liked your write |
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Very well put, all of us have suffered tremendous pain in our lives i'm sure...
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Sadly, sometimes Heartache is the shadow of Love.
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good write
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thanks..
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good write.
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Thanks again..
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What an awsome theory of writing I really enjoyed reading a well put together thought out emphasis on only what the heart feels and knows. It is so true and well written I sat here just in awe of how creative one's mind can relate to the many areas of life. Thank you for sharing
Love: Carol |
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Past memories hijack reality, while echoing silent regrets
nice line good poem |
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