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Emerald Eyes
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You write beautiful poetry. Continue to harness your creativity and your writing will get even better.
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Topic:
Emerald Eyes
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Nick
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Thanks for sharing.
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Eat or be Eaten
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Nice. I like the flow of your poetry.
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Love
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I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Ego, unity wisdom
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Good poem.
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Good.
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forever and again
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I agree . Displaying all those things to someone can make a world of difference sometimes. Be blessed.
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poetry for the uninvited
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Wonderful poem. You write well.
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uninvited outside the box
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Great job! Is this your first contribution to the forum Jeena?
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Topic:
Peasants Beneath the Hill
Edited by
Nick
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Sun 11/07/21 04:50 AM
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Very interesting perspective...
That line "leaving dough for evening bread" gives a double meaning. |
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Topic:
Peasants Beneath the Hill
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Very enjoyable to read.
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Heal and be in peace!
Edited by
Nick
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Sat 11/06/21 02:49 PM
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I enjoy reading your poetry. Your poetry stays with me,so much so that I find myself remembering some of the lines without effort.
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forever and again
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I enjoyed reading your poem, Bittersweet.
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mantra
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Simple yet delightful to read.
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mantra
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Good. Nice rythmic poem.
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Topic:
Unheard Prayers
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That's great. I enjoyed reading your poem a great deal.
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Soulmate
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That's nice.
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Lonely forever!
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That's a very good question. I await the answer.
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Celebrate the Light in You!
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A really great gem this one.
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And Another Treat
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Thanks Peppa... Sorry for the similar titles for my poems,I know it may been a bit confusing.
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