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One lonely night... inside the four corners of my dark and quiet bedroom, I prayed for someone to love... someone to love me in return.
I thought the heavens and the universe were listening as I whispered and pleaded my heart's wishes and desires but... probably, they only heard a little piece of my prayers, I guess they missed the biggest part when I wished for it to stay forever... |
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Nice .
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Wishes heard
Desires left Unheard? May be you Prayed within walls Wait till Right time arrives! Someone be Here in this world to Make it true. |
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Nice. Good start.
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That's great. I enjoyed reading your poem a great deal.
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