Topic: Unheard Prayers
CrazyBitsAsian's photo
Sat 10/30/21 01:38 AM
One lonely night... inside the four corners of my dark and quiet bedroom, I prayed for someone to love... someone to love me in return.

I thought the heavens and the universe were listening as I whispered and pleaded my heart's wishes and desires but... probably, they only heard a little piece of my prayers, I guess they missed the biggest part when I wished for it to stay forever...

JulieABush's photo
Sat 10/30/21 01:47 PM
Nice:thumbsup: :wink: .

Vibes's photo
Sun 10/31/21 01:06 AM
Wishes heard
Desires left
Unheard?
May be you
Prayed within walls
Wait till
Right time arrives!
Someone be
Here in this world to
Make it true.


Nick's photo
Sun 10/31/21 05:27 PM
Nice. Good start.

Nick's photo
Fri 11/05/21 03:12 AM
That's great. I enjoyed reading your poem a great deal.