Topic: Lonely forever!
Aatheera's photo
Sun 10/31/21 02:55 PM
Lonely were the days,
Fate as it says!

God was the only trust,
Who gave hope to be a must!

Dark nights knew my tears,
But my soul did not have any fears!

Broken wings of mine weren't painful,
But ignorance from my dear ones left me sorrowful!

I had strength to overcome the insults thrown on me,
For I knew there wasn't any beside me!

I did not wander for care,
As love did not bless me fair!

Started painting the path with my poems as I walked,
For I had no one beside even to talk!

Lonely were the days,
Fate as it says!

My feathers started withering away,
But my legs kept walking far away!

Feared only for ignorance,
So remained lonely without a significance!

Let me remain Lost and Unknown!
As I can't sustain ignorance from the well known!
Let me breathe until God desires,
Until then let me remain lonely with what life acquires!
-Aatheera

Nick's photo
Sun 10/31/21 04:27 PM
Good poem! Keep writing.

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Sun 10/31/21 09:46 PM
Absolutely relatable and so expressive

Aatheera's photo
Mon 11/01/21 12:48 AM
Good poem! Keep writing.

Thank you :thumbsup:

Aatheera's photo
Mon 11/01/21 12:49 AM
Absolutely relatable and so expressive

Thank you :thumbsup:

JulieABush's photo
Mon 11/01/21 01:03 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Aatheera's photo
Mon 11/01/21 01:04 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thank you dear ❤

Kat's photo
Tue 11/02/21 02:45 PM
Nice

Aatheera's photo
Tue 11/02/21 11:53 PM
Nice

Thanks Tee :thumbsup:

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Wed 11/03/21 01:47 AM
Lonely were the days,
Fate as it says!

God was the only trust,
Who gave hope to be a must!

Dark nights knew my tears,
But my soul did not have any fears!

Broken wings of mine weren't painful,
But ignorance from my dear ones left me sorrowful!

I had strength to overcome the insults thrown on me,
For I knew there wasn't any beside me!

I did not wander for care,
As love did not bless me fair!

Started painting the path with my poems as I walked,
For I had no one beside even to talk!

Lonely were the days,
Fate as it says!

My feathers started withering away,
But my legs kept walking far away!

Feared only for ignorance,
So remained lonely without a significance!

Let me remain Lost and Unknown!
As I can't sustain ignorance from the well known!
Let me breathe until God desires,
Until then let me remain lonely with what life acquires!
-Aatheera

nice:revolving_hearts:

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Wed 11/03/21 01:48 AM
wat do u desire more than anything in this world aatheera??

Nick's photo
Wed 11/03/21 05:10 PM
That's a very good question. I await the answer.

Aatheera's photo
Thu 11/04/21 01:58 AM
Guess, the answer lies within my poem.. :blush:

Have good times littlebuddy n Nick :thumbsup:

Vibes's photo
Thu 11/04/21 02:18 AM
U need a consoler
Not a controller
With more passion
Not compassion
One to drive away ur loneliness
With affection more not less
Always to consult
Not to insult

If so

Wipe out your tears
Without any fears
Let new wings grow
Like Phoenix u glow
May someone be your aside
It is better to you,decide.


Aatheera's photo
Thu 11/04/21 05:03 AM
U need a consoler
Not a controller
With more passion
Not compassion
One to drive away ur loneliness
With affection more not less
Always to consult
Not to insult

If so

Wipe out your tears
Without any fears
Let new wings grow
Like Phoenix u glow
May someone be your aside
It is better to you,decide.

@Peppa, let's not discuss on the needs of mine please, if you can understand in the right way, as we haven't known each other n assumptions in your poems doesn't feel appropriate for me :slight_smile:

I get to read nice poems from you n would wait to see newer ones on your own topics of interest too :thumbsup:

Happy Diwali :slight_smile:

Vibes's photo
Thu 11/04/21 05:50 AM
I agree
Wish u also a happy Diwali

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Fri 11/12/21 12:32 AM
N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E

Aatheera's photo
Fri 11/12/21 01:53 AM
N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E

Thank you :slight_smile:

no photo
Sat 11/13/21 01:02 AM
Nice lyrics. Really good :thumbsup:

no photo
Sat 11/13/21 01:59 AM
Lonely Forever

Lone-liness For A Moment
For-ever Is Memories Along
You Thier & Me Here
Somewhere Somethings
Thinking Of Eachother
Nothing Last Forever
So Even Loneliness
Is A Time Of God Hopes
We Are Living It On
TOGETHER As Ever.............Robin

:slight_smile:Aatheera:slight_smile: