Topic:
The Fall
Edited by
Cascadex
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Sat 02/02/13 09:14 AM
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The peaceful autumn breeze,
Barely noticed… Weaves, between the unsuspecting leaves: An artful assassin, Creating a masterpiece. Its victims, drifting calmly Bright and vibrant. Rebelling, against their inevitable end: The hope inside them, Pulsating Blood into their veins. u s e l e s s As the grass opens its arms, Accepting. Whispering, the final words of wisdom. The only one, who notices, Who cares? As they wither slowly, It reminds me of a pain. Only momentarily forgotten. Each fallen leaf, A tiny piece of us. And inside… Somewhere, A wish. That smoldering inside our souls, Is a power so great: They could merge together forever. And baby, it will happen, I promise. In the peaceful autumn, When the crimson leaves blow… …Back on to their withered branches. |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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Don't worry about it this is from a long time ago, I was just sifting through 10 years of stuff and plucking it out, pretty sure I was only 16 or 17 when I wrote that one Knowing you were that young when you wrote this makes it even more meaningful to me...TY for sharing! No problem Sometimes I am jealous of my younger self because I could just sit down and bang out a piece in like 2 minutes, and it seemed so easy, now for some reason not so much. |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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Awesome write. Silence is golden, or maybe the words never spoken aloud, are from the heart. Thanks, and yeah being comfortable in silence is definitely an important thing for two people together. |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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cool cascade, i am enjoying your writes. the story within a story, well done! :) Yeah this is one of my favourites because originally when i wrote it, it didn't have all the bold formatting and such, and when I looked over it later I noticed I could easily tweak it to have a sort of double layer effect, and I really like the way it turned out |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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This was fantastic...Loved it... Why thank you Ainjel |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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I used to tell my friend, that I loved just hearing him breathe during our times of silence when we spoke on the phone. The silence meant so much, because I knew he was there listening to me too.. So when I read the beginning I began to cry. Your words are so beautiful and moving.. I hope she does come back to you... How could she not know how much you really care when you can spell your heart out like this... Don't worry about it this is from a long time ago, I was just sifting through 10 years of stuff and plucking it out, pretty sure I was only 16 or 17 when I wrote that one |
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Topic:
Painted Stars
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I love it! Both playful and meaningful. Much respect. Thank you very much |
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Topic:
Lost and Found
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Thanks so much everyone, I feel like there is a really strong poetry community here. I have looked other places, and none seem to compare. Who would have guessed I would find it on a dating site
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Topic:
Painted Stars
Edited by
Cascadex
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Fri 02/01/13 11:07 AM
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I really had to correct my formatting on this because the place I had it stored had a different tag system, which had line break tags. Anyways there is no preview option so I will just pray it works. If it does the bold words can be read from top to bottom for another layer. got it to work after 4 edits :P
Painted stars Silence never comforts me so much, As when it comes through the phone. Too afraid to say anything, To start the silent storm, Of tears and somber emotions That come from two hearts , sewn together With a thread, so strong, it must be love And when they are torn apart, It doesn't rip at the seam And they drift away. Ignoring the large pieces, That still stick together laying tangled on the floor Painting a crimson sunset so beautiful, Wishing for the summer stars, So we can hold each other once again. But this sun won't set The stars aren't coming this time are they? You said they aren't coming ever. Will you come back, Come back and help me paint the stars? |
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damnit I'm going to have to completely reformat my poem because of no break tag oh well
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blah blah [br] llalala
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Topic:
You rocked my world...
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that's a beautiful twist at the end love it
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Topic:
a look at those eyes
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Simple, elegant and direct I like it.
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Topic:
Lost and Found
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really cool.. I hear the snap loud and clear... good write.. and welcome to the writer's forum.. Thanks I have a bunch of stuff lying around, maybe I will get to digging through it and posting some more |
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Topic:
Lost and Found
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Wandering
Something...missing Searching with a spirit Carefree As a child running towards an ice cream truck Looking for the simple beauty Lost and found Inside anything Oblivious To all else Too naive to know All the weight and pain in the world Can rest on the few frayed strings Of an old bracelet Snap |
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That was steamy Cascade!! Some say silence is cold And deafening But silence is like water- It exists in many states In our case: steam <-------------------See, Steamy!! Our bodies covered In the condensation So slippery Thank you!.... Thanks Leigh, I spent about an hour reading through the thread and really appreciated that you would try and start something like this up and keep it going for so long... I have been writing poetry for 10 years now, and I just love that you have this "steamy" poetry community thing going on. Unfortunately those were pretty much my two steamy poems.... I guess I will have to start writing again sometime soon |
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Well I tried to blaze through all the formatting, hope I didn't mess it up anyways here it is
The Perfect Silence I see you waiting, In the distance. nervous, (I can tell by the way) Your lower lip (The right side) held lightly between your teeth. I glide silently, Unnoticed Weaving through an unseen crowd, my eyes firmly fixed Upon your ***(ets) My arms Like steel covered in satin Swoop Around your waste From behind And lock As my teeth simultaneously Sink Very lightly-(at first) Into soft flesh Beside your neck Turn Suddenly Your hands Digging into my back Pull each other Tightly Our bodies compressed As if we were trying To merge With welcoming embrace Slight movement In your throat Lips begin to part My index finger Quickly intersects Before any words can form Slides down Slightly damp From the traces Of sweet saliva Understanding radiates From deep inside Your eyes Your mouth tightly traps My lone digit Like constrictions of a snake Reluctantly Our vice grip is broken But not our stare The air Full of tension (The same kind of tension- in the left leg of my jeans) The walk is long Or so it would seem Constantly distracted By quivering lips Which would then Inevitably Come together, a timeless moment I pointed at my house in the distance Then with a smile You ran like a cheetah hard as you possibly could I waited for a time Before my legs Outstretched like the wingspan of an eagle And I flew Flew past you effortlessly And waited Panting By the door We retreat inside Our hearts already thundering the door swings And even before It clicks back into place We are on each other Like wildfire in a dynamite factory A swath of clothes Trace an erratic path To my bed Like lines on a pirates map As I work my way Down towards the treasure box Worth just as much But gold would never taste nearly as sweet Your moans like an angelic choir Except without the innocence Then without notice I find myself knocked flat And finally we do merge You pull me up So close It feels like our souls Could set the air ablaze I stare deeply In your eyes and see such raw power It doesn’t surprise me When I am inside of you We are no longer mortal Oh no We become each others gods Of passion and lust Some say silence is cold And deafening But silence is like water- It exists in many states In our case: steam Our bodies covered In the condensation So slippery Your skin tastes salty/sweet nearly impossible To take my mouth Off your body-long enough to breathe You start to shake Like the tremor of an earthquake Unable to control anything Until you Come (yet again) Back to your senses We wait outside the door now Our time Had passed An eternity not nearly long enough You give me one last exchange of passion Through our lips And then turn away As you slowly walk I can’t help But break the perfect silence To say those three small words That mean so much, maybe too much "Please, just stay." You turn and smile Give me a simple wink and a wave And continue on your way I know you don’t mean goodbye Only "I'll see you again." |
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Ha, thank you very much. I have another one, but first I need to know if there is some kind of html or bcode on this board for bold, italics ect... it has a specific format, and I would need to know how to do that Yes there is, here's the link http://mingle2.com/topic/show/199646 Hurry up, I'm horny Hah well patience is a virtue, and this one is much longer than the last one, plus I will have to make sure all the formatting is right. So I'm afraid you may have to bathe in sexual tension for a few more minutes, but isn't that really a good thing anyways? |
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Ha, thank you very much. I have another one, but first I need to know if there is some kind of html or bcode on this board for bold, italics ect... it has a specific format, and I would need to know how to do that
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Tight as Innocence
Your iris flutters like a monarch wing My teeth slowly scraping Letting go, Of your lower lip. Burning brighter, My desire for tongues... Tracing hips And lovers grips, Tight as innocence. Your breath in my ear Teasing, Taunting me to bliss Is all I need To thrive. |
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