Topic: a look at those eyes
JustANormalPerson's photo
Thu 01/31/13 10:49 AM
Have you ever looked into her eyes
And ever wonder oh dear my
If this will be and it will last
To live the dream just you and i
To breath together hand in hand
To let you sleep on my left side
And hold you close for all lifetime.

no photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:19 PM

Have you ever looked into her eyes
And ever wonder oh dear my
If this will be and it will last
To live the dream just you and i
To breath together hand in hand
To let you sleep on my left side
And hold you close for all lifetime.


okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe..

but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. :heart:flowerforyou

Teditis's photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:24 PM
Aye, I like that you're sharing more.
Exposing your heart, practicing your craft.

It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those
moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me.drinker

Teditis's photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:25 PM
Edited by Teditis on Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM
Ack, a triple post... sorry.

Teditis's photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:26 PM
Edited by Teditis on Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM

JustANormalPerson's photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:50 PM


Have you ever looked into her eyes
And ever wonder oh dear my
If this will be and it will last
To live the dream just you and i
To breath together hand in hand
To let you sleep on my left side
And hold you close for all lifetime.


okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe..

but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. :heart:flowerforyou


She gets the left since this way we she sleeps at night upon my chest she can listen how my heart beats just for her. :smile:

JustANormalPerson's photo
Thu 01/31/13 01:52 PM

Aye, I like that you're sharing more.
Exposing your heart, practicing your craft.

It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those
moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me.drinker


Your welcome and i hope they made u happy and not sad.

tayah12's photo
Thu 01/31/13 03:01 PM
I like this one 2. Its the big question we all ask @some point.

Cascadex's photo
Fri 02/01/13 07:51 AM
Simple, elegant and direct I like it.:smile:

JustANormalPerson's photo
Fri 02/01/13 02:16 PM
Im gAld u both liked it :smile:

threepurpleroses's photo
Fri 02/01/13 06:48 PM
flowerforyou The eyes are the windows to the soul.....they tell you so much....your write expresses a wish for answers in those eyes....short, sweet, and straight to the point. Nice job!flowerforyou

JustANormalPerson's photo
Fri 02/01/13 08:06 PM
Yes the eyes always tell the truth. Im happy you liked and thank you for reading hope to have more up soon.

Keep your eyes open.