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Have you ever looked into her eyes
And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. |
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Have you ever looked into her eyes And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe.. but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. |
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Aye, I like that you're sharing more.
Exposing your heart, practicing your craft. It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me. |
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Edited by
Teditis
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Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM
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Ack, a triple post... sorry.
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Edited by
Teditis
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Thu 01/31/13 01:45 PM
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Have you ever looked into her eyes And ever wonder oh dear my If this will be and it will last To live the dream just you and i To breath together hand in hand To let you sleep on my left side And hold you close for all lifetime. okay, normal.. I feel kinda weird posting to this one becuz I'll never look into her eyes and wonder...lol... but.. I can't just let this write slip by either... without calling dibs on which side of the bed... I sleep on the right side.. so I'm automatically disqualified to sleep on the left... hehehehe.. but seriously... I do get the gist of what you're saying.. and it's nice to see a man who lays his feelings and desires on the table.. She gets the left since this way we she sleeps at night upon my chest she can listen how my heart beats just for her. |
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Aye, I like that you're sharing more. Exposing your heart, practicing your craft. It's a nice write... I vaguely remember those moments and feelings from long ago... thankx for reminding me. Your welcome and i hope they made u happy and not sad. |
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I like this one 2. Its the big question we all ask @some point.
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Simple, elegant and direct I like it.
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Im gAld u both liked it
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The eyes are the windows to the soul.....they tell you so much....your write expresses a wish for answers in those eyes....short, sweet, and straight to the point. Nice job!
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Yes the eyes always tell the truth. Im happy you liked and thank you for reading hope to have more up soon.
Keep your eyes open. |
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