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Hidden Sound
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Wow. The write is beyond intense  
"And there it lay in utter silence ... It's golden clasp had melted away... So upon it's contact with the ground, the lid popped open, and out tumbled sound. A piece of sound, trembling with fear, Yelling for peace, with no one to hear."  
Wow... you never cease to surprise me with your comments! Thank you very much. Too much more, and I'll be smitten with you! And thank you as well, to Faithfulone, and CodeLockBox... For the Flowers, and three cheers! |
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18 Year Old Will
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Good Write Man. "I'm letting go of all my smiles... Think I'll pass those out to the poor! I mean, what good is it if you're the only one, Who ever wears them anymore?" Witty! I like! Thanks alot for saying so! Glad you liked it. Witty works for me! 
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My Soul Mate
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I love looking for you.. Oh my gosh... 
I don't know what to say, but I know i love seeing you, as much as you like looking for me. And, as always, I'm just an Email away! |
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My Soul Mate
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Missing And poof she's missing. Not there, again. Perhaps it's because, Her description begins. Her fade to the flowing, Surely you see, Is in the mind, Allow her and free. Keep your soul open. A door's just a frame. Move through her liquid, She'll come again. When least you expect, Her knock, will you hear. Perhaps and then maybe, She's aleady here. Raine Les 5/8/2008 A wonderful response indeed. Such flowing life... Move through her liquid, She'll come again. Over the top, above par... and a vivid, wonderful image. |
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18 Year Old Will
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Kinda left me speechless here,, I will just ponder these thoughts and leave you with a Big ole Hug, and my Love
As I've said before... Your hugs are the best... And to leave you speechless/typeless... well... leaves me filled with gratitude... Thanks LaMom. |
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Hidden Sound
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Hidden Sound .(Thought I'd dust er off)
When I was a little boy, I took a piece of sound, That someone said, but didn't mean, then trampled on the ground. Then I put it in a box, and then the box beneath the bed, When it made a tiny little yell... Peace was what it said. So I left the box under the bed, wondering what it would say, To humor me when I was bored, to save for a rainy day. But I'll tell you now that this little box, was no ordinary thing, Specially designed with me in mind, it could withstand anything! It had titanium sides, and iron hinges! A miniature golden clasp! Not to mention a petroleum covering, to protect from Time's solid grasp. But that rainy day never did come, And I forgot about my piece of sound, Underneath my unkept bed, Locked away and bound. I, into manhood had grown. And it, it wasn't as strong as before. It's petroleum covering had torn away. And it's clasp was scarred and worn. I, like time, had passed on. It, had remained on the floor. I, was spared our gruesome end. It, lived to see the last Nuclear war. And as the rockets pierced the air! And every human turned to stare! My box sat serenely on the floor, Watching the passing of a silly war. And that silly war took an ironic bend, but for my box, a little worse for wear, Not one thing lived to see it's end! There was radiation everywhere! And not one thing left to say, That Human beings had ever lived there... Except, ... for my box, floating high through the air. Sent to the sky by the very last flare. It came tumbling down to meet the ground, or what was left of it anyway. And there it lay in utter silence ... It's golden clasp had melted away... So upon it's contact with the ground, the lid popped open, and out tumbled sound. A piece of sound, trembling with fear, Yelling for peace, with no one to hear. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild 
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Perhaps... that could be me
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We may fall,, but you my friend will achieve all the greatness you seek,,, You fly with a spirit unlike many...
LaMom... it is encouraging words like yours, that keep everyone you meet, from falling. |
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Perhaps... that could be me
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"Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me?" No. Your Soul seems too great to not overcome
Thank you again... your deep words have caused me to catch pause in my breath... in awe of you... Thank you for shining your AngelLight on me!
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Sometimes...
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This is probably my favorite write by you so far....a playful, light and loving piece....niiiiiice~
A very unexpected treat of a compliment... Thank you so very much! You have really touched my heart today!
(and LAMoM Hugs, are always the best...) |
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My New Friend
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YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSS.
You make me feel good! |
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My New Friend
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hiker, your poetry is blooming like the rare flowers of China...
Beautiful when beheld, and exquisite in the memory... This really, was a wonderful tribute/write, that I think anyone would be honored with. It's been/and is, such a pleasure, to see your poetry bloom more and more, everyday. Congratulations, on achieved perfection... achieved from the heart. |
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My Soul Mate
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you still have got it AquaMan..lol Lol... It's always a real THRILL, to see what friends will show up, and when... and to be reminded, that I couldn't find any better ones, anywhere else. Thank you Batman... I know that my confidence is safe, with you guarding the city. |
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At Least Say It JSH
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That awesome you chanced 
Thank you AngelLight! What a lovely silhoutte you have! A compliment for me, deserves a (flowerforyou)
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Two Children
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Thanks Johncarl. I love flowers. Seems that many people are becoming cats these days... and cat flowers (catnip) are the best.
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My Soul Mate
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Shshs our soul mates seems to just disapear. lol 
Good one 
Aww TxsGal... How I miss you, when you don't even know it. Such a personality. Thank you for leaving a remark! Miss you, and am glad you liked it. |
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My Soul Mate
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I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came 
LMAO... sounds like inner-sex poetry!
I'm a sexy poet... who doesn't blow it... (His own horn)
my new friend and the poem I wrote about her..I promised her sexy poets.. http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/114261 I wrote a response to this on the link Hiker! Lol... "thanks" for showing me, how we all missed out! |
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My Soul Mate
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Thinks this is a nice write and would go well in "Song of Solomon" Well done Frozen 
A very unique, critique... Thank you so much! Very delightful to read!
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In The Moon
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Perhaps one day the moon will stray close enough, that the tides of such love will sweep over you, as the shadows recede, and the stars shine brighter, when wishes of eclipsed love, reveals itself before your eyes. Wonderful, excellent, descriptive Poem/Creative writing... Thank you for sharing such a daring... Celebration of thought.
And we breathe, thank you The pleasure... neigh... (like a horse, hee hee, punny) the privilege... is all mine. Thank you again! |
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My New Friend
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I suppose that since I was directed here by Hiker, that I just might be a sexy poet?
Well, my name isn't Jerry... And a lot of people on here call me Wesley... But, I'd be willing to give it a shot. If she would like a poem, she only needs to smile, and it will be done. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild
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My Soul Mate
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I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came
LMAO... sounds like inner-sex poetry!
I'm a sexy poet... who doesn't blow it... (His own horn)
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