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Topic: My Soul Mate
FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 06:42 AM
My Soul Mate I sit and ponder some crazy thoughts, About the Real essence of poetry. When I hear a commotion outside my door, That raises my curiosity. So with fearless abandon, I chase what I seek. And in three leaps and bounds, Through the peep hole I peek. And through a circular world, I spy standing there, A creature of love. Impossibly rare. Soft skin and two eyes, Invitingly blue, That tell me she'll love me, And forever be true. With black shimmering hair, Curling round her sweet smile. I feel my heart skip, Then stop for a while. Just with one look, I felt my pain cease. And my heart whisper wonder, At it's missing piece. My soul mate... I feel it to my deepest core, This is the one who understands me... This one that I Know I'd die for... My heart finally snaps, Slowly starts to beat again. And my hand races for the door knob, To let my soul mate in. Now as I slowly turn the knob, A smile upon my face I dawn. The door finally stands open... well crap... She's Gone! With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Thu 05/08/08 06:44 AM


hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/08/08 06:45 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 05/08/08 06:46 AM


FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 06:49 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came LMAO... sounds like inner-sex poetry! I'm a sexy poet... who doesn't blow it... (His own horn)

beautyfrompain Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 4696	Thu 05/08/08 06:50 AM
Thinks this is a nice write and would go well in "Song of Solomon" Well done Frozen

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/08/08 06:51 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came LMAO... sounds like inner-sex poetry! I'm a sexy poet... who doesn't blow it... (His own horn) my new friend and the poem I wrote about her..I promised her sexy poets.. http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/114261

CleanBathroom Joined Thu 02/07/08 Posts: 5544	Thu 05/08/08 06:52 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came HIKER!!!! How forward of you.....

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/08/08 06:54 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came HIKER!!!! How forward of you..... she needs literate men..and there are so few.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Thu 05/08/08 06:57 AM
Shshs our soul mates seems to just disapear. lol Good one

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 07:12 AM
Thinks this is a nice write and would go well in "Song of Solomon" Well done Frozen A very unique, critique... Thank you so much! Very delightful to read!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 07:12 AM
I love your poetry -don't ever stop writing. I told my friend we had sexy poets here, and I wrote her a poem..but none of the sexy poets came LMAO... sounds like inner-sex poetry! I'm a sexy poet... who doesn't blow it... (His own horn) my new friend and the poem I wrote about her..I promised her sexy poets.. http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/114261 I wrote a response to this on the link Hiker! Lol... "thanks" for showing me, how we all missed out!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 07:14 AM
Shshs our soul mates seems to just disapear. lol Good one Aww TxsGal... How I miss you, when you don't even know it. Such a personality. Thank you for leaving a remark! Miss you, and am glad you liked it.

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Thu 05/08/08 07:23 AM
you still have got it AquaMan..lol

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 07:38 AM
you still have got it AquaMan..lol Lol... It's always a real THRILL, to see what friends will show up, and when... and to be reminded, that I couldn't find any better ones, anywhere else. Thank you Batman... I know that my confidence is safe, with you guarding the city.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 05/08/08 10:40 AM
"well crap... She's Gone!" ROFL! Great execution.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 05/08/08 01:11 PM
Missing And poof she's missing. Not there, again. Perhaps it's because, Her description begins. Her fade to the flowing, Surely you see, Is in the mind, Allow her and free. Keep your soul open. A door's just a frame. Move through her liquid, She'll come again. When least you expect, Her knock, will you hear. Perhaps and then maybe, She's aleady here. Raine Les 5/8/2008

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 05/08/08 01:12 PM
I love looking for you..

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 08:07 PM
Missing And poof she's missing. Not there, again. Perhaps it's because, Her description begins. Her fade to the flowing, Surely you see, Is in the mind, Allow her and free. Keep your soul open. A door's just a frame. Move through her liquid, She'll come again. When least you expect, Her knock, will you hear. Perhaps and then maybe, She's aleady here. Raine Les 5/8/2008 A wonderful response indeed. Such flowing life... Move through her liquid, She'll come again. Over the top, above par... and a vivid, wonderful image.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 08:08 PM
I love looking for you.. Oh my gosh... I don't know what to say, but I know i love seeing you, as much as you like looking for me. And, as always, I'm just an Email away!