Community > Posts By > FroznChild
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At Least Say It JSH
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Lol...
Thank you ladies, for expressing your opinions! Jsh is really the place to rock, when surrounded with such encouragement! (I might hold you to that hiker!) I just figured, more people ought to take a chance, at learning how to classically dance... with JSH romance. |
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My Soul Mate
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My Soul Mate
I sit and ponder some crazy thoughts, About the Real essence of poetry. When I hear a commotion outside my door, That raises my curiosity. So with fearless abandon, I chase what I seek. And in three leaps and bounds, Through the peep hole I peek. And through a circular world, I spy standing there, A creature of love. Impossibly rare. Soft skin and two eyes, Invitingly blue, That tell me she'll love me, And forever be true. With black shimmering hair, Curling round her sweet smile. I feel my heart skip, Then stop for a while. Just with one look, I felt my pain cease. And my heart whisper wonder, At it's missing piece. My soul mate... I feel it to my deepest core, This is the one who understands me... This one that I Know I'd die for... My heart finally snaps, Slowly starts to beat again. And my hand races for the door knob, To let my soul mate in. Now as I slowly turn the knob, A smile upon my face I dawn. The door finally stands open... well crap... She's Gone! With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild |
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Topic:
At Least Say It JSH
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As I sit here and think of the past,
May my teardrops fall slow... Because I want the memory to last awhile, Before it's time to go. I remember when I first saw your smile, How I stumbled in my step, and my jaw hung low. I could barely believe it, my heart had stopped, It's love only one place to go. I had to sit down for a minute... Catch my breath and rub my eyes. Damn it, I knew I was dreaming! Cause it's only in dreams, when your heart really sighs. So I took a chance, and decided, That I just had to talk to you. I couldn't let you walk away, Without knowing if you loved me too. And now, that we've hung out for awhile, And you know how much I care. I just wanted to tell you something... Even though that isn't fair. Because you have obligations, and a love that's not really whole. I don't know why you can't just see, That only I can fill your soul. But even if I can only watch you, While my heart breaks each day anew... I can at least say that I took that chance! To let you know, I think I love you. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild |
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Topic:
waiting game
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Well said. I hope that you have the patience to read my response!
J/k. Love is not easy to wait for... Especially, when it has two warm arms you can wrap yourself in. |
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Topic:
Those Who Love HIKER
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Wow... I never even knew this very impressive thread existed.
Truly, you are a jewel amongst your friends Hiker. Course, I love you too. Equescent thoughts, always... FroznChild (Who can also talk about goats in Irish) |
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Good Mornin'
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Good morning Everybody! Morning Shoesmonkey... Great Posidiuem. |
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Topic:
Simple War
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No worries at tall loved one.
I hope that everything works out for the best of course. You know I'm pulling for you both... As for my poetry, Lol... Always feel free to leave as many compliments as you like! |
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Topic:
Good Mornin'
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Im taking my boat out for the first time this year! Ahh... I see! Nothing as chillin, as chillin like a villian, in the Twilight Zone... Sounds like a great time. I haven't been in a boat for a couple of years now. Love boats, but I don't swim so well. Cool for you tho! |
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Simple War
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A very good poem of heroisim My firend.. bravo, well done.. Daniel... Very long time no see! But, I really thought that you would like this one! And it pleases me to know end, to see a comment from you! Thanks brother!. |
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Simple War
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Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm... Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational. Did the Title give it away tho? Or was it a surprise? Benjamin - my suicidal daughter makes you lol? My goodness. EEEWWWW.... YOu mean one you. Not so much lol... as in, laugh out loud, but more like, Loss of Logistics...? Poor excuse maybe... Well, tell her I said hi... that might cheer her up. Nothing funny about the S word... At least, not that one. (Good thing you winked at me) |
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Simple War
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I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair? yeah he does...normally with thing of chew in his mouth as well. he would be about your age...he was the best man at my wedding. But i lost contact with him..i heard that he and alex might have split up. I KNOW his last name...but i can't seem to recall it at the moment. I'm not sure what his last name would be, but I think that I know who you are talking about... My sister Song, might know a little more then I. |
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Topic:
Good Mornin'
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I cant wait until saturday Do Tell... what happens saturday? (never get an invite... ) lol.... |
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18 Year Old Will
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to be able to leave with the world all of the qualities in ourselves we are proud of wouldnt that be nice great write enjoyed reading it thought provoking ahh FallinAngel... Your making me blush from head to toe. Thank you for the wonderful, awesome comment. You're not to shabby yourself! thanks... |
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I know... I used to venture into your mind all the time before you lost it... It always was so much bigger then my own... Never did like having to take my shoes off tho... Not like there wasn't already sand in there. We call it specks. No wonder you're always looking for your glasses then... You must have lost them Specks, when you lost your mind! |
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I know... I used to venture into your mind all the time before you lost it...
It always was so much bigger then my own... Never did like having to take my shoes off tho... Not like there wasn't already sand in there. |
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Topic:
Time
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Lovely.
Well written, and thought provoking,... yet, relaxing at the same time. The flow from beginning to end, was superb actually, and the idea concise... flowing. No B.S. That's what I thought. Great Write Jen... Keep up the Sugar... |
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Topic:
Good Morning
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Simply a day of poetry, and tea...
Then, maybe tomorrow, Skydiving, and Gatorade... Either one promises to be just lovely! |
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Topic:
Simple War
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Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm... Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational. Did the Title give it away tho? Or was it a surprise? |
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Topic:
Simple War
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak Lmao... Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time? (stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho. Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair? |
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Hee hee hee...
Well, I simply Ajar you too! Your Adore, is Ajar. |
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