Topic: In The Moon
Sharris's photo
Thu 05/08/08 12:23 AM
"Man In the Moon".. I have longed for

The man I have longed for is like the Man in the Moon.
I see his face.
I have seen his face since all of my existence.

I could always look up to him.
He would be there.
I could outstretch my arms upward, and always
Just almost touch him.

He is constant and yet,
for the times he has not made himself visible to me..
I know he is still there,
just clouded for that brief of moment.

My heart's time has been set by his existence.
I am confused by any other time.
Even in the daytime,
I look for him,
although I know he will not show himself
until his appointed time
to reveal his "Always Splendor".

He is so very far and away
and still I desire him.

"Far" and "away" will become "someday"
and "soon"and he will call me to come to him.

and the "Man In the Moon" and I shall become as one.

Raine Les 11/11/2006

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 05/08/08 12:27 AM
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 02:01 AM
Perhaps one day the moon will stray close enough,
that the tides of such love will sweep over you,
as the shadows recede, and the stars shine brighter,
when wishes of eclipsed love, reveals itself before your eyes.

Wonderful, excellent, descriptive Poem/Creative writing...
Thank you for sharing
such a daring...
Celebration of thought.
drinker

Sharris's photo
Thu 05/08/08 06:55 AM
Edited by Sharris on Thu 05/08/08 06:56 AM

Perhaps one day the moon will stray close enough,
that the tides of such love will sweep over you,
as the shadows recede, and the stars shine brighter,
when wishes of eclipsed love, reveals itself before your eyes.

Wonderful, excellent, descriptive Poem/Creative writing...
Thank you for sharing
such a daring...
Celebration of thought.
drinker

And we breathe, thank you

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 07:05 AM


Perhaps one day the moon will stray close enough,
that the tides of such love will sweep over you,
as the shadows recede, and the stars shine brighter,
when wishes of eclipsed love, reveals itself before your eyes.

Wonderful, excellent, descriptive Poem/Creative writing...
Thank you for sharing
such a daring...
Celebration of thought.
drinker

And we breathe, thank you


The pleasure... neigh... (like a horse, hee hee, punny)
the privilege...
is all mine.
Thank you again!

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/08/08 07:23 AM
""Far" and "away" will become "someday""



flowerforyou yes, sharris...:heart: drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 05/08/08 08:09 PM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou